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After AnimeCon: The Hunt

🕑 Added 2024-07-24 16:46:32 +0000 UTC

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PGamet

The question I have been asking myself is "The Masters" really needed for the story to continue? So far the story has been about Brian, the girls and building their relationships. Also everything to this point has been about dealing with or coming to terms various aspects of managing multiple relationships between everyone involved. The sex is okay but the drama from the dynamics is also interesting. It's refreshing to see someone write a harem story, deal with the different feelings that come with any relationships and dealing with negative stuff along with the positive.

benjamin shropshire

I'd suggest putting this as an interlude between major plot segments. Particularly if it doesn't tie into anything for another few chapters. I think it would work well as an "oh, by the way, don't forget the Masters are still out there" followed by enough chapters for the reader to forget they are.


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