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After AnimeCon: Down and Dirty

🕑 Added 2024-07-30 14:03:52 +0000 UTC

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Clovermite

I really like Judas as a villain, and I'm hoping we see more of the politics between magic organizations. This kind of worldbuilding makes the story legitimately like an anime, and now I'm super curious to see how everything all works.

Drakenclaw

Thanks for the chapter. Fun fact: If you actually have movie washboard abs, stop. You have a dangerously low percentage of body fat and are probably dehydrated.

MrSkyentist

Solid re-write. Going back to when Rebecca was first charmed and was being affected by Stephanie and Brian boning, she seemed very hesitant to picture Brian as her go to. With a better understanding of the charm magic and not being currently on it like the other girls, being able to relax and be attracted to him knowing it's not just the charm magic is refreshing to see. Especially after their sword match to snap him out of the rage funk Chloe caused and her really realizing why she was into him to now makes where this chapter went feel very genuine. Yea they wanted each other super badly, but not at the risk of making sure they had a connection before the charm magic was in full effect.

Jeanie6754

Thanks for the story. Have a good day, don't forget to set some time to relax.

Zaralith

It is nice to see the mental shift on what the charm does from mind control to simply openness and encouragement in Brian as he learns to properly get it in his brain that the charm is not some magic date rape machine. Can't wait for more because there's never enough.

benjamin shropshire

I think there's some really interesting potential in Rebecca allowing Brian to be dominant because Brian knows she's only going to choose that to the extent she wants to. If you look up some of Jordan Peterson's commentary on what people find attractive, for girls, one of the archetypes is Beauty and the Beast with a man who has their monstrous nature under strict control. Rebecca seems to be working on a bit of shift from that in that she has the ability to take control (or at least can refuse to give it up) but choose to gift that to Brian. Personally I find that gleeful, trusting and voluntary surrender a very attractive presentation.

FortySixtyFour

He's getting better!

David

Is he ever going to stop doing this?

Mocherthrath

TFTC


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