(SPOILER) Tongtian's Three Temporal Incarnation
🕑 Added 2023-09-22 13:01:00 +0000 UTCThe one on the left is Shitian, the Past Incarnation. Middle is Shangtian, her Present Incarnation, and the right one is Tonggu, her Future Incarnation.
I love it, but I feel that Tonggu kinda doesn't fit in. She does conform to the savage and barbarian female Pangu I was going for, but she seems a bit too cliche. However, I can't think of anything, so it will have to do for now.
What do you guys think?
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Yong Cho
This is an easte
KaiserBlak
The first half of Book 2 is already on Patreon
Vangelis Theodoratos
I think it's better to post each chapter in patreon after you finish it even if the update time is inconsistent rather than publishing it all together
Vangelis Theodoratos
Yes
KaiserBlak
They feel a bit too civilized for me. Since Tonggu is basically a female Pangu, I don't want any sort of fabric on her except things like fur or leather.
Caleb Bear
Vietnam: Ba Trieu https://chaohanoi.com/2020/05/03/badass-women-of-vietnamese-history-ba-trieu/?cn-reloaded=1 Mongolian https://www.reddit.com/r/ImaginAsian/comments/mrho4a/mongolian_warrior_woman_by_bayarmagnai_avirmed/ Indian https://playgroundai.com/post/clmfw409w03s6s601gr0b648x Polynesian https://playgroundai.com/post/clldg5sks0hxqs601kao74hsu The Indian and Polynesian images look the closest to what you already have while feeling more "Asian barbarian" to me. I got the images from a google image search using the phrase "ancient _______ warrior women"
KaiserBlak
Yes
KaiserBlak
which one, tonggu?
KaiserBlak
Have a image reference?
KaiserBlak
The first half of book 2 is already done, and after I finish the second half, I will have it posted on RR
CrusaderHandrail
Might need to re read to catch back up then
CrusaderHandrail
When I finished the patron chapter available at the time she had just gotten her male corpse to sainthood. After the war of heaven
InPass
That’s the end of book 1 you can find book 2 here in patreon
Caleb Bear
I think you mean Shitian instead of Tonggu. Also, since this is an Asian influenced world maybe make her look more like a "barbarian" from the steppes of northwest Asia, the jungles of southern Asia, the Indian subcontinent, or the islands of the Pacific. Right now she looks more like a Viking barbarian to me which is European.
CrusaderHandrail
I haven't seen an update for Tongtian in a while. Is it still being updated? Definitely my favorite of the three but it just kind of ended qt the creation of the tree and the ascension to sainthood (sort of)
InPass
Savage*
InPass
I always imagine Tonggu with like bronze skin with slightly less defined muscles and a more save expression/aura
InPass
Tonggu does look out of place
Vangelis Theodoratos
Is the one above the main body
Vangelis Theodoratos
The hairstyle doesn't fit
Captdeth
This was my best one yet
Captdeth
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