Zobbie
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Should I do chapter 2 in May?
🕑 Added 2023-04-16 13:18:08 +0000 UTCHello !
I think I can already ask for your first opinion on my new series! Do you like it ? I'm very happy to do something a little bit new on the theme of possession in addition to the usual transformation!
I think next month I will continue chapter 2 and start to include the antagonist of the story : Mei. Also explain some stuff about how linlin can get dressed once her clothes are destroyed or how she can store things!
You'll see the succubus in her come in handy~Mei will be a yandere bounty hunter at the base. But not really a demon fox! You'll find out in the next chapter how she came to be possessed by a demon fox~.
Like I said I will do chapter 2 next month, unless you want me to come back to my other series to finish the other characters maybe?Give me your opinions~ thanks!
Comments
Zobbie
I see! I remember these scenes! It's been a long time. I think I have enough of a reference now thanks! We'll see if I can improve for chapter 2~~
yachi
NARUTO!!!I like that scene in Naruto too. You are right, there were wings on Sasuke's back. I searched for an animation and found that there is a scene in an anime called "Haibane Renmei" where he grows wings while in pain. Also, there is a scene in "Puella Magi Madoka Magica" where she grows wings while her back expands when she transforms into the demon Homura. I hope this will be of some help.
Zobbie
Funny! you made me think of the fight of sasuke against naruto! or Sasuke has wings that come out of his back! haha. Thanks, I found some references! I will do it for the next chapter!
yachi
Thanks for your reply. Hmmm...how about wings, for example, with the shoulder blades rising and enlarging, and when they grow to their limit, the wings expand at once as if they were going to explode? Ricardo Irving of Resident Evil 5 and the transformation of Matou Shinji of Fate/stay night [UBW] might be helpful in describing this area.
Zobbie
Thanks for your comment! I'll try to see what I can do for the second chapter! I can try to stretch linlin's clothes to their maximum for the chest! For the tail it could be done, but the wings I can't imagine...maybe I can make some bumps before the burst? It will be the occasion to refine his transformation in the second chapter~~
yachi
The description of the legs deforming over several pages was very nice! On the other hand, I felt there were not enough deformation scenes for the chest, wings, and tail, so it would be nice to see one or two more cuts. Specifically, I envision the clothes stretching to their limits and then bursting.
