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Sketch Mona's curse V
🕑 Added 2024-01-10 15:27:04 +0000 UTCOh my goodness! it's finally here! it took a year for the rest, but now it's here!
Don't hesitate to send me your suggestions! I've already planned to modify page 14, where we see Fischl's mutated feet. I'm going to make it so that you can see through the shoes like an X-ray.
I'm also going to start the Mona's cuse VI chapter with the fight against Celestia! That way, the two sketches of the series will already be created and then I'll finish them.
Don't forget that both chapters won't be in color and black and white like the previous chapters. But I'm planning to add a few color elements to the important parts, like the eyes and some clothing fabrics and Fischl's monster form.
Thanks for your support~
Comments
Zobbie
Thank you! I'll also add the Fischl stockings that I also forgot about. So my X-ray idea is interesting. I'm glad I could make them more often! The shoes burst has always been my highlight in my mangas. I can't conceive of a manga without that kind of scene! (≧◡≦)
Zobbie
Thank you! Yes, I had to make a choice because I wanted a little more present scenario without shortening the transformation too much. I think it's a good compromise right now. Afterwards, I could always redo a little Fischl scenario devoted solely to her transformation~.
Toby
Amazing comic. I’ll be eagerly awaiting to see it in color. Seeing the x ray of what’s happening inside the shoes is a great feature. If I may suggest next time show her or another character’s feet tearing through their stockings before her feet burst out from shoes. I really love the shoe bursting in your manga. It’s the main reason I support you on Patreon.
DaMan234
Amazing comic as always! I love how there is a mix of story and sexiness from the transformation! My one criticism is that Fischl's transformation seems a bit short. Starting at page 17 of the sketches, I feel that the transformation goes a bit too quickly from her tail growing, then immediately to her breasts growing, and then to her wings and beak taking effect. I understand that you wanted to make room for the story and the reveal at the end, but I feel maybe some extra pages would help highlight Fischl's pain and arousal from her transformation. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the final chapter!
