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Rewrites (This One Is Just Motherly)
🕑 Added 2023-06-14 04:58:29 +0000 UTC((Y/N)'s POV)
Red, Alice, and I were looking for food since we were hungry and I didn't care which story we were in because I just want to stock up on fruit and water before we leave. We don't leave sight of the library, we don't do anything else to get attention from a little girl or 3 bears or anyone. We know we are just getting food and we put them into a box, and when it was full we just got 3 vases to fill with water for us. This is the only time we left the library, but not too far. Alice was walking right next to me and smiled as we talked until she looked back and didn't smile anymore.
Alice-Pardon me (Y/N), but... Where is Red?
I looked behind us and I didn't see her. There is no way we are that far ahead of her, so had to have left us to go somewhere else.
(Y/N)-Red!... LITTLE RED RIDING HOOD!!! *echo*... *Sigh* Help me find her.
We put our vases down and called out to her, but she didn't answer us until we were getting close to the library again, and we could hear her from far away. We ran to where we heard her until we saw her on a path from the top of a hill.
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(Y/N)/Alice-Red!
She ran to us and looked excited when she grabbed our arms.
Red-Come! I followed someone to a house and they might be willing to share some food travelers like us!
(Y/N)-What house?
Red-It looks pretty, so they must be nice! Come on!
(Y/N)-Woah, woah, woah, woah... Woah. This book is Goldilocks and the 3 Bears, so that means we are not going to any houses.
Red-But Bears live in a cave and this world looks normal.
(Y/N)-Three bears go out for a walk and a little girl breaks into a house, tried everything in there until it was just right, and she runs all the back home when they come back.
Alice-But didn't you say that these books are different from what you read on others?
(Y/N)-I'm sure it will be... mostly fine. Bears can't be that fast if they are that big, right? Plus, if you leave them alone they won't do anything.
Red-No they won't.
(Y/N)-Huh?
Red-Mother always told me that bears will attack if they are hungry or just angry. I grew up in the woods and a woodsman even told me that most animals will attack.
Alice-And if she broke into their house... Wouldn't they get mad?
I tried to come up with an argument, but that was really hard. I tried making things up, but even they shot those down. I kept on going until they both had enough and took my hands to pull me a little to walk with them.
Alice-We will read the ending to see what happens. If she will be fine then we can leave her be.
(Y/N)'s mind-Please don't die, please!
We made it back to the library and Alice grabbed the book, and we all found a place to sit down for what felt like storytime.
Alice-*Ahem* Where could the culprit be? They all ran upstairs and tiptoed in amazement over to Baby Bear's bed. In it lay Goldilocks, sound asleep. Baby Bear prodded her toe. "Who's that? Where am I?" shrieked the little girl, waking with a start.
They both looked at me and I can tell this will end up with a bad ending, and we will go save her... I don't want her to die, but I don't want to go near bears. I'm allergic to sharp teeth and big claws that want to kill you!
Alice-Taking fright at the scowling faces bending over her, she clutched the bedclothes up to her chin. Then she jumped out of bed and fled down the stairs. "Get away! Away from that house!" she told herself as she ran, forgetful of all the trouble she had so unkindly caused. But Baby Bear called from the door, waving his arm: "Don't run away! Come back! I forgive you, come and play with me!" And this is how it all ended. From that day onwards, haughty rude Goldilocks became a pleasant little girl. She made friends with Baby Bear and often went to his house. She invited him to her house too, and they remained good friends, always.
I was actually surprised. Nobody died, nobody gets tortured, and it sounds like she learns a lesson. They felt better about my plan of leaving her be and letting the story run its course.
(Y/N)-See, everything is ok. She even makes a friend, so can we just collect the water and go?
Red-That was a nice ending and they sound lovely.
Alice-They do... Perhaps we could ask for some help to get water and more food than fruit.
(Y/N)-Well... They are friends even after breaking into their home.
It was settled. Red took us back to the house and just when the story looked like it just ended because we saw Goldilocks walk back to the house and to the 3 bears... I just didn't see the bears from the bush.
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She looked a little older than me and taller. I felt nervous, but Alice and Red were the first ones to leave the bushes and I stayed behind them.
(Goldilocks's POV)
I felt relieved and sorry that I broke into the house and called it things like ugly. Mr. and Mrs. Bear were really not angry with me at all, and Baby Bear wanted to be friends. I was still lost and they said they would help me, but they looked at something behind me. I turned to see 2 girls and a boy with (H/L) (H/C) hair, and (E/C) eyes walk up to the house.
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Mama Bear-Dear, are these friends of yours?
Goldilock-No. I never saw them before.
They stopped a few feet away and the fancy-looking girl that was the oldest of the group took another step forward. She even had an accent.
???-Hello, my name is Alice. These are my friends Little Red Riding Hood-.
Little Red Riding Hood-You can call me Red.
Alice-And (Y/N).
(Y/N)-Hi.
The Bears introduced themselves and Mama nudged me, so I looked up at her to see her smiling ad urging me to introduce myself.
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Goldilocks-Hi... I am Goldilocks.
Papa Bear-So, what are 3 children out here all alone?
Alice-We are... lost, Mr. Bear. We were in the middle of collecting food and water.
Mama Bear-Oh dear. Four children, all lost and out here on their own?
Papa-Please, come in. We will allow you to stay until we can find your parents.
Mama Bear went behind them and led us all inside. Baby Bear wanted to play and he looked only a bit taller than a teddy bear, so it was like having cute fun. I looked at the others and noticed that (Y/N) had odd-looking clothes on. I sat next to him on the chair that was just right for me while he sat in Papa Bear's chair.
Goldilocks-So, where did you find those weird clothes? They look a little silly.
(Y/N)-Uhhh... You know, a... guy on a cart.
(Mama's POV)
I heard the children play in the living room, or rather my son, Goldilocks, and Red. Alice and (Y/N) seemed to be quiet and reserved. I thought one house a bit of ways away would be likely for Goldilocks, but the clothes the others were wearing. Red seemed casual and from around these areas, but Alice's clothes looked more fancy, and I have never seen clothes like (Y/N)'s before.
Mama-Dear, what do you think of this situation? Four children lost and the other three were collecting food and water.
Papa-They seemed a bit dirty too. They must've been out here for a while.
Mama-You don't think they were abandoned, do you?
Papa-Well... Let us not rush to conclusions. We will care for the children until we find their homes.
I love him for being optimistic, but this had me worried for them. I don't know how far they have come or what could've happened. I peeked into the living room and looked at (Y/N) sitting on Papa's chair while Alice read a book off a shelf, and Red and Goldilocks were playing with my son. I just paid special attention to the young lad.
Mama's mind-What happened? What region did those clothes come from? Is that your home?
I went back into the kitchen and my mind went else wear to try and think of all possibilities, and one didn't seem so bad...
Mama's mind-Five children... A hand full, but they are all so cute and or pretty.
(Timeskip To Night)
(Red's POV)
We thought it would be a good idea to stay the night and think about what to do next and Goldilocks was a little mean and nosy, but she is just learning. We all got baths, our clothes were washed, and we made little beds. We all had a story time and Alice and I told half of our stories about (Y/N) saving us, and the bears and Goldilocks loved it.
Baby Bear-Amazing story! Are they real?!
Papa Bear-Now slow down there chap, it's just a story.
Alice-Actually, they are real. (Y/N) helped save our lives.
I nodded my head and they looked at (Y/N) who already fell asleep, so the parents took Baby Bear with them to his room and left the four of us down here with candles for light. I looked at Goldilocks and Alice and I scooted closer to her.
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Red-Hey, so how are you? I'm 7.
Goldilocks-I thought it was 'rude' to ask a lady for her age... But if you must know, I'm 11.
Alice-I'm 12... I hope you find your home soon.
Goldilocks-How did you get lost anyway? I just got tired of my parents ordering me around to do chores... Then I got lost after storming off for too long.
Alice-Well... I'm not sure how it happened, but it started with me following a white rabbit and I tumbled down a hole... Just a little.
Red-I told you in my story. I was attacked by the lying Big Bad Wolf and (Y/N) saved me.
Goldilock-What about him?
Alice-We're not sure, but... he is a true gentleman to help us in our time of need.
Red-I'm not really tired... What else may we talk about?
(Timeskip 3 Hours)
(Mama's POV)
My husband was already asleep in his big bed, but I could not sleep. The stories of those children lingered in my head and one may have a hard time sleeping. I decided to go check on them. I tiptoed as quietly as I could down the hall with a candle for soft light. When I made it to the living room, I heard all of them either breathing heavily or snoring softly.
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I gave them each a gentle is on the head and stopped at (Y/N) to play with his (H/L) (H/C) hair a little until he stirred in his sleep. The slight brush on his cheek made his body act and grabbed two of my fingers. His small hands compared to my big ones looked so adorable and couldn't ever wrap around my two fingers completely! I looked at all the children again before I gave (Y/N) his kiss... Making a decision.
Mama-Such awful parents to lose their child... We can all be so happy here... My children. ~ *whisper*
I got up and blew out what little was left of these candles before I went back to my bed. This time, I could sleep much easier knowing that all of these children are home now. Papa will listen to me and my son will be so delighted to not only gain a brother, but three sisters. I lied in bed thinking about what I could do with my new children. Like brushing their hair since humans have less, but longer hair like my daughters do, and my sons can share a room.
Mama-*Squeal*! ~
