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While You Were Sleeping - Page 12
🕑 Added 2024-07-10 14:35:06 +0000 UTCThink the tighter pencils really helped - two day turnaround on this one!
One page left and then onto issue five.
Comments
Abe Snake
Thank you! Thanks for picking those bits out. Slave over things like that, so it's rewarding hearing them called out.
Stefer
This is such a good page. From the dialogue "m'boy", to that pause in the layout to give time for the coast to clear & Maise's husband's expression which perfectly shows without having to tell. Again I think this is a fantastic short story!
