Leaqio.com
Zogarth from patreon
Zogarth patreon

Chapter 48 - Unexpected Encounter (3/3)

🕑 Added 2020-11-01 16:00:09 +0000 UTC

Comments

Zogarth

Not gonna complain.

Nick B

So what does it feel like having a made a couple hundred bucks in a couple days lol

Tim Stanglow

And in Europe, where the author is from, the standard is a point.

Bradley Weyers

Not sure if this in intentional but I noticed you use periods in you larger numbers US standard is a comma example 591.235 vs 591,235

Zogarth

Thanks, fixed them!

BubblyGhost

"Malefic Viper, being" ->a* being "dwell on that the hell was"-> on what* the "The ring was like the armor of the warrior quickly deposited" -> This sentence is off, need a rewrite. Btw you used the word 'honestly' 5 times this chapter.

Amelgar

Please don't let it be Caroline he meets first...

Impulsive Monkey

“She stood before the incarnation of [Death] and decay.” Not dead👍

Impulsive Monkey

Hey I know you’re deciding what to do with how to structure your Patreon right now so I kind of want to help. I’ve Subscribed to many writing Patreon’s and typically the best ones are the ones with 10 dollars as a max with about a month of chapters ahead, then with a 5 buck with two weeks and then a smaller one with however many they decide(it differs a lot). I’m also going to give you a few edits for this chapter.


More Creators