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Chapter 52 - Meeting old friends (2/2)

🕑 Added 2020-11-04 12:40:45 +0000 UTC

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Zogarth

As a side-note, reading RR chapters that are up is better than here. Those tend to be a bit more edited with fixed typos and stuff.

Alexander Doran

Rereading th story from rr chapter 1-40 now reading It again here. Poor Jake 😞

Zogarth

Hey, I would just say that it is better to read it on RR than Patreon as those chapters have gone through more edits due to RR comments.

Shadeymankey

Not sold on how stupid he was with the “plan” for the meeting. Not assuming the whole camp would notice an arrow shot into it and that Richard, the leader who wants him dead, would get involved?

Alan

I hope Caroline dies a incredibly painful death. She is literally worse than Richard and William put together

Zogarth

Fixed!

Jake

Paragraph 3 "He did making plans," < This Caroline had stipulated that they needed a proper plan before going to the meeting, something Jacob had agreed to instantly. ***He did making plans,*** which was why they had taken so long to leave. Jake had only specified a place to meet and not set time. But from how it was written, he wanted it to be sooner rather than later, but a few hours shouldn’t be too much. The meeting area was quite open-ended, but Jacob had confidence in them finding each other.

Zogarth

Yeah, I suck at that word XD

Bradley Weyers

Several instances of LIMPS instead of limbs in the fight scene

Derrick McDowell

The writing is getting better already.

Novice Reader

I can't wait to see people's reactions to these chapters especially those who wrote bad reviews!

RottenTangerine

Great chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing the aftermath in the camp and for Jake... itll especially be interesting once this tutorial ends

Zogarth

There already has been two released :p But no one expects the third!

Sacred

Didn't someone say 2 more chapters were being released today? * He asks, as he crosses his fingers lol


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