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Chapter 58 - Herrmann Schmidt

🕑 Added 2020-11-09 10:31:31 +0000 UTC

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Tatsu

Thanks for the chapter. My big problem with Will is just that he is marked for death in my head since his first real introduction. No amount of character building will change that for me so all this content with him is just bothersome to wade through while trying to catch the important bits. Nothing to be done about it now since it is already written but please for the love of the malificient dont go down the savage divinity path with your story. Also concerning all the flak you get on RR: 1. If a character (especially the mc) does (for the reader) obvious mistakes and it affects the plot in a major way, you will 100% have keyboard warriors all over the comments. They will bombard you with 1000 different ways of how the ideal version of the mc that lives in their head would never have done that. 2. Giving a hated character (even by design with will) too much screen time will lead to many an upset reader. That is not due to POV shifts (those are quite refreshing if it is from a char you like) but simply due to waiting for the chapter release, only to have it taken up by the villain being villainly and leaving you frustrated . That frustration doesnt even come from that villain pov being badly written but just that something you were looking forward to turns into enduring someone you cant stand at all. This is just my lone opinion, so take it with a grain of salt.

Zogarth

Actually, i changed it to make it a bit less german.

Niraada

Son's name changed from Gunnar to Gunther? Or did William just forget it that quickly?

C. Wilbs

Awesome! I think it was a great move bringing a more human-side of William to our attention. It really amps up the drama/angst. well done!

Zarik0

Yeah dat was i afraid, the author dont want to close the arc tutorial storie clean, so he asspul the other so they can play a big role later Its bad in my opinions when aniways they gonna be irrelevant logically when he go out (he have to much grown and the 200 humans in HIS tutorial is not the entire earth or new multiverse when he go out. So better to clean the storie and get most of new character after the tutos (he his a alone hunter with few social contact atleast its consistant with his character initially if he does this) Make no mistake i love how he created and the work he done with the sub-character (interaction and blabla) but he need to let them go (to close their story arc), its better for the story i think for the quasi total of them to become irrelevant or dissapear (no asspul of plothole and fresh thing coming)

PrimordialJay

I was hoping for a mana arrow skill that he could imbue with aspects such as poison

Amelgar

No, it's [The Power of Friendship] ;D

lenkite

Time to power up William - [Metal Savant], [Epic Armour], what's next - [Grand Blessing of Metal Divinity] ? I guess he can go on a [God-like Killing Spree] through both camps and then kill Jake with his little finger. Meanwhile Jake is restricted to choices like [Inferior Nature Affinity] and [Piercing Shot]. Please give Jake [Lightning Affinity]. That's pretty much the only way I see him beating Williams now...

Amelgar

I'm kinda hoping he gets off just as he starts to fit in with other people ;D Would be rather satisfying

Zogarth

One has to remember that William is very easily manipulated...

Amelgar

I'm kinda skeptical of The Smith's friendship with William. It seems entirely likely that William would have offed his family if he stumbled across them in the forest before they joined Richard's camp.

Jess_2037

I get that you wanted the readers to feel a little bad about Williams fate now that he’s at least capable of understanding his own feelings but honestly I think you made him too “evil”.


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