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Chapter 59 - Stamina

🕑 Added 2020-11-09 14:44:04 +0000 UTC

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Amelgar

Depends on whether his alchemist class extends to acids that can melt metal

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I know this sort of counts as spoiler-ish, but would it be possible to get an estimate on how many chapters left until Jake and William have their fight to the death?

Jess_2037

Any chance jake will end up with a “hunting dog” or pet/companion?

CyclopsSlayer

It looks like William is having fun. BTW, Williams's armor is Jake's Bane armor. Diffuses Kinetic energy, what do you think arrows, knives, and fists are? William can seal the armor making him immune to poisons. I wonder how much damage Jake cursing at him does? But that is all he has left.

Zogarth

Can't we just change the official spelling of the word limp already? I miss it every time. I also removed a bit of repetition.

BubblyGhost

limp-> limb did this thrice also in this chapter you once again had Jake state that his bloodline was his "greatest asset", I think you've said that several times through the story so far, at this point it's just irksome repetition. A few more errors but I forgot to ctrl-v them, but I'm sure somebody else will sleuth 'em out.

Zogarth

Not at all, Jake has just been in the outside zone that was thoroughly searched. Lots of phat loot in the inner zone, as well as quite a lot of other interesting things to discover.

Zarik0

Its time he get some item droop too no? like upgrade 1 time atleast all the starter item he have, with how much he move and hunt and when compare to other people stuff they discover (number and etc) he got nothing for too long (author forget a bit about it?) :) He can get quiver double/daguer multiple/leather armor? atleast the self repear and better arrow

Amelgar

Ooo, has attempting to control William backfired on Richard? Or is it just Richard taking out the other camp? Will be interesting to see where this goes :D

Kevin Caffrey

Jake: Claws his way into power. Barely makes his way through a death trap, spends every waking moment for a month studying alchemy, almost dies while finishing the challenge, literally blows his own arms off as he learns about energy. Everyone turns against him for no good reason. William: Gets a super epic class dropped on his lap just because he learned an affinity from an item. Has someone sacrifice their own life to give him epic mithril armor that has every appearance of totally countering Jake. Everyone goes along with his murderous schemes despite knowing his true nature. It really feels like the author has stacked the deck too much against the MC. I mean, I’ve heard of the concept that it’s fine to write excessively OP villains but this seems to be stretching it. If William is being set up as the implausible anime style super boss, I think it would have been better to not see the crazy powerups from his POV and instead just have him pop up as OP final boss.

Yes William is only good as a "first boss."

webolive

I really hope you will not make William his arch nemesis and make him recurrent in the story. He don't inspire any respect, you really made him too edgy and evil.


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