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Chapter 69 - Augur of Hope

🕑 Added 2020-11-15 15:52:12 +0000 UTC

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Niloc

She said she "paid attention to him" because of the 2 interesting people. William hasn't met a god and assuming that she's not paying attention to other stuff kinda seems on you imho. Jake clearly has done an incredibly weird thing, but that doesn't mean William isn't interesting even if he's only in the top 5% of interesting people.

Bakerdea

Thanks for the chapter! Can't wait to see where the story goes next.

fbt

lol @ the haters. Anyone who presumes because of these events that it *must* go in a certain direction is simply projecting; that's what you'd write. You're not the author, and each person writes and imagines differently. We'll have to see what Zoggie does with it. :) I admit I kinda wanna smack Jacob a little bit, but that's not my job. :)

I always hate bad theology in fiction

Cirex123

People are gonna be sooo saaaalty when this chapter hits RR.

Anghwrtais

Damn paladins.

HenryMorgan

Hope Will gets a dirt nap, or massive amount of punishment.

HenryMorgan

I enjoyed the chapter, Jacob is retarded, but he is consistant with his charactor.

lenkite

You know, he doesn't really need to kill William if his [Pacifism] demands it. He can ask his buddy to do it for him. Or just point William out and give a *hint*.... or just ask his buddy to make sure William can't see or hear anything.. [Pacifists] are folks who get other people to do their violence anyways.

Zarik0

Its thing like this i dont wanna see in this good story, like the 1200 people in the tutorial are the only one, (when we have billions on earth going into tuto, all the big important thing happen in this little shitty group of 1200 people, bleee, one or 2 people why not because some god get aroused by the viper move (by the way how they know? mm) But we already have 5 people here who got big thing happen, i dont like it, prefer is the arc are better clotured with how the mc character is done than dragging all other people with asspull for they stay big relevant in futur We have already to much thing not good when other get big stuff for nothing aka asspull for them, you dont need this aspect author you already proven than you can write and create good thing on other people (Pov, the dynamic, social, etc) so dont asspull them with power and retard decision they go plz, You have a entire new universe coming in the system, plenty to get new character or interaction and grown of previous in next arc

Zogarth

Fixed.

BubblyGhost

Interesting for Jacob as a character, however, how utterly moronic. He speaks of wanting to help the others and himself survive the tutorial to the best of his ability, and recognizes the danger that William poses in his certainty to kill the remaining survivors. Yet in the next second simply decides to selfishly take no action to remove or even maim Will for the safety of others due to "not wanting to see people die". Grossly clashing with Jacob's characterization of being an intelligent fellow. mop -> mope , Jacob -> Jacob,

CyclopsSlayer

Jacob joins a namby-pamby religion, fails to protect his flock, allows death to survive that he will have NO chance to stop when William awakes. Jacob is just a stalking horse with no future.

Juli Freixi

Wow!! AMAZING!!! I really like it!! Thanks a lot!!!

LordHailith

This chapter makes no sense at all

Blaublue

Oh no. "Of the punishment of the wicked" - and who is supposed to judge whether one qualifies as being "wicked"? I hope this isn't another case of 'The Light' being corrupt, but that the Holy Mother is actually quite decent, and is a speaker for civilians and those unable to defend herself. But how does sapience play into this? In this world after the System, beasts can become sapient, but is killing thousands and thousands of non-sapient beasts for the sole sake of leveling up okay with the Mother? It smells like trouble, but time will tell

roflvaliant

Heh. Nice.

Nobody

I'm always annoyed with characters that are pacifists bordering on retarded. Jacob is retarded.

Kingtie

Nice

The Human

I guess we want it to be Jake who gets the kill for all the ridiculous number of tournament points, but Jacob should really kill William while he has the chance it's pretty crazy not to.

Zogarth

My childish desire to call the chapter "Chapter 69 - Nice" were only quelled at the very last moment...

Michael Hughes

Since you uploaded two chapters together most people skipped over this one. I was expecting at least one "Nice" given the chapter number. I will be the one to do it then. Nice.

I like the setup that led to this chapter. Felt like a pretty natural next-step


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