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Chapter 72 - Den Mother

🕑 Added 2020-11-16 16:19:27 +0000 UTC

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Zogarth

Not sure it is in this chapter? I can't find the sentence when I search.

Torbjørn Nilsen

it was quite a lot more powerful -> quite is a filler word here, and not needed.

HenryMorgan

Cheers

Juli Freixi

Thanks a lot for the chapter!!

Zogarth

Confident, but as many have noted, he normally just counters the enemies after his initial assault. This time he did all he could to keep hold of the momentum, dictating the flow of the battle. Also, if someone cares enough to point out corrections, it can't be all that bad :p

Zogarth

I fixed it. Yeah, he can just switch it as he wants, but can only have it active on one target at a time.

BubblyGhost

But Jake had something* he didn’t in this fight compared to the others. -> *in this fight he didn't when compared to the others. (Switched words around to make sense, also I thought he was usually confident against beasts?) trash-> thrash (btw good last chapter, I usually forget to leave actual comments besides corrections lmao)

Zarik0

Nice chapter Need to know more how Mark of hunter skill work It was little confusing the part he cant use on alpha no time for it ("He didn’t find a chance to switch it") but sudenly he use it on it just second before they die for xp (in melle combat vs 3 alpha), and the part he let it on the mother for slow her heal by the continue damage boost is fine about this decision but confusing/conflicting about it with how he say he cant use it on alpha because its not insta and just after he use it just before their die, so its insta or not? and he really choose to let in the mother or he let it because he cant switch it like he want? All the confusing come for the "He didn’t find a chance to switch it" part And if he can only have 1 target and he cant switch it like he want insta i hope the upgraded skill can give him multiple target possible

Patrick Ralston

That was a good fight. I also enjoy how Jake is perfectly willing to take advantage of the problems introduced by the dungeon behaving like a video game.

Zogarth

Fixed.

Zogarth

Fixed.

Zogarth

Fixed.

SpaceGoddess76

I think in the 3rd to last paragraph it should be retaining. (Remaining —> Retaining)

PrimordialJay

Thanks for the chapter! I love that we got the whole battle in one chapter! In the 3rd paragraph I think you put missing instead of messing.

The Human

Limps I think should be limbs

RottenTangerine

Now to wait and see his rewards... this was a good fight to read

yay thank you so much!


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