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Chapter 98 -Valley of Tusks

🕑 Added 2020-12-11 15:33:18 +0000 UTC

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Zogarth

Yeah, I edited it.

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter 'he outsped the beasts' outsped -> outpaced (sounds better, but might just be me) 'it to much damage' -> 'it to do much damage'

Zogarth

Yep, fixed. Thanks!

Termac

> […] he was forced to jump out of the way, making him quickly shelf that idea again. shelf → shelve (noun vs. verb) > Once more, having reached a new pinnacle of power of attacking power with the new bow, […] pinnacle of power of attacking power → pinnacle of attacking power (I *think* this is what you meant)

Zogarth

Yep, was a mistake, thanks mate. Fixed!

Not sure about this but "What many him even more flummoxed" > "What made him even more flummoxed"

Zogarth

Fixed.

Vaccus

Interesting chapter! rock eating boars, never would have guessed that! Edits! Hundreds of not thousands --> Hundreds If not thousands he got the chance to access --> he got the chance to assess easily vans’ size. --> easily van sized.

Michael Hughes

I guess this is the timed fight. He needs to kill the hoard before all of the pillars fall down and every action could trigger a charge.

An_Amazing_Username

Well this is interesting. This chapter was rather satisfying as boars sort of seem to been one of his most challenging foes throughout the tutorial.

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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