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Side Story 4 - Bloodlines: A cursed blessing

🕑 Added 2020-12-13 15:13:23 +0000 UTC

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John Durrett

Not gonna lie. As the kingdom's megacaster bar none, I'd tell the King to Sod off and die without creating another child of misfortune. If the King cant keep his Kingdom without their help then it doesn't deserve to stand.

forgetfulposum

"their expectance was mixed" -> expectancy "No none had ever" -> one

The Void

Dark.

Michael

A bit too complicated for it to be exploited, sadly. The mana has to be removed from their surroundings, it exponentially increases mana regen speed with age, and takes too long to remove in a safe way. The only method possible would be some kind of super mana sink in the form of an item that can hold near infinite mana, but since the family hasn't been picked up or taken in by a god/primordial, it's obvious that there is essentially no way that doesn't cost more than it's worth to save them.

Zogarth

Fixed

Duder

“To pass on the bloodline is a privilege… nay, a responsibility. To keep the system’s blessing alive is the great honor there is.” [great >> greatest (?)] The only family she really talked to was her aunt, who took care of her throughout her life was the caretaker assigned to her at birth. ["her life was the caretaker" >> "her life and was the caretaker"

flssdd

Some day someone will get a skill or a class or a profession that could exploit the hell out of that bloodline and it will spell the end of that kingdom.

AnonyGuy

Probably one of those bloodline where the OG holder died without passing it on and it got recycled by the system into a person incompatible for it.

V

damn that’s truly sad the bloodline is powerful but the body simply can’t handle it

Zogarth

I mean that the Matriarch died the day she evolved to B.

Vaccus

But she could no longer fight too much as she would soon reach her next evolution… and with it her death. That was how the Matriarch died too… the day she evolved to B-grade. she is peak D grade, wouldnt her next evolution be C not B

Zogarth

"They had tried everything through the ages. Items that would constantly drain mana did help, but the issue was that the mana regeneration kept accelerating. Eventually, the items would run out of mana storage and become unable to absorb more." It doesn't work like that. The mana also needs somewhere to go, and with it constantly accelerating it will one day lead to death anyway. Besides, why would the kingdom necessarily want to try too much to help them?

Corwin Amber

I only have one complaint about this story; I feel like the kingdom is poorly managed. IF the kingdom/king/ruler ordered this and the problem was as described, isn't creating a piece of armor or equipment that has a constant drain on mana to function possible? Wouldn't something like that drain off excess mana to allow a semi-normal life or life-span?

Zogarth

Nah, it is meant to be 8, it is a reference to their internal categorization. But I spelled it out to make it more clear. But thanks for the input :p

Corwin Amber

'category 8' 8 -> D


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