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Chapter 101 - Mana 101

🕑 Added 2020-12-16 15:31:52 +0000 UTC

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fbt

um, "feels like hours"...how long can he go w/o breathing? isn't this thing way way way underwater? as written it seems he only surfaced once briefly, then spent a looong time underwater. Just swimming hundreds of meters down and then back up would take while. Slightly confused...

A B

Seconding this. Water transmits pressure waves ( sounds) exceptionally well. It's why sonar is effective in water and sound pollution in the oceans is a real problem. But yeah, if the pigs aren't physically in contact with the water, are standing on ground, they likely wouldn't feel it.

Beowulf

I understand what you were conveying but water does transmit very well. However it takes a massive push to change mediums which is what I think you were trying to get across without having to write three extra sentences.

Zogarth

Fixed.

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter 'However, it was only partly' <- feels awkward/runnon type sentence. might want to re-word. 'so to say' say -> speak 'was hit mana' hit -> his

Nice one thanks

mana 101 on chapter 101 😏

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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