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Chapter 78 - Introspection

🕑 Added 2020-11-22 15:53:44 +0000 UTC

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Zogarth

Fixed.

Corwin Amber

'what was more even more' -> 'what was even more'

fbt

interesting twist. Welp, we'll see what happens!

Runaway_Cactuar

Yeah, at this point, I would even advocate for the story to be released in chunks. It's obvious that he's going for a massive payoff 20 chapters down the road, but in the meanwhile, we're stuck with this slow drip of anti-fan-favorites William and Jacob plot armoring their way through the tutorial, logic be damned. I'm gonna stick with this until I see that payoff and judge for myself, but man. it's not easy seeing Jacob rewarded for his stupidity.

Zogarth

Fixed.

Zarik0

................. For me the story is going yololo for some time now, to many thing are................. Well im still gonna wait to see some chapter after the tutorial end for say if i stop or continue because im stubborn and the author have hinted he have a big plan as to why it is like this now, but for now its not good, not good at all, to many thing are not credible and seem wrong, its little thing to the big tread of the story yes but with the accumulation of this type of problem, the big tread get impacted hard by the fundamental block.

BubblyGhost

As one knows, then an engaged -> remove then guides show the mortals towards -> sentence break/pause after guide, replace the word show (probably with 'leading')

Zogarth

Fixed it!

A B

something to when whenever --> something to think about whenever ----- Thanks for the new chapter!

Juli Freixi

Thanks a lot for the chapter!!

Zogarth

Fixed!

The Human

He found his way to power by resolving himself to be a leader and to try for the future and protect people. While meeting his literal new Goddess she even mentioned having to kill to protect and remove evil, I'm pretty sure nothing in the system is or would hold him to being a pacifist.

CyclopsSlayer

"included, had already written." insert a 'been' on either side of already, ie "included, had already been written."

Leeland

I don't get why everyone is looking down on Jacob for NOT killing. It was a very human decission and it payed of well in the end. He found his way to power without betraying himself. What use would it have been to kill William just to stay a powerless doubtful little man to be killed later by someone stronger?

Zogarth

There are around 50 alive.

Ikawaii

I thought there were not a lot of people left alive but there is still ~100 people alive? Kinda thought that the purge killed more.

Morog T Tiny

Hmm, Yes. Jacob is an idiot.

Zogarth

The feeling of Jacob and William feeling "superior" like this is entirely on purpose... one of those things that will only make sense later on (not that long now, less than 20 chapters).

The Human

I just want Jake to walk out of here as the only survivor at this point. And then have to overcome that reputation with people in the future.

The Human

Just kind of sick of Jacob at this point, since he more or less commit murder suicide with the remaining 50 crafters by letting William go. Also, it's a little weird as someone else mentioned we keep seeing all these epic and godly connections for Jacob and William, feels like it cheapens Jake's abilities and makes it less reasonable that he be able to do what he's getting done and we expect him to do in the rest of the tutorial. Also, this is all just one tutorial instance, so either the gods are handing out attention like candy to trick or treaters, or the odds of so many of earth's heros being in this one instance seems a little weird... Still, all that said I'm really enjoying the Jake parts of the story and I trust you to carry us through as an author.

Impulsive Monkey

Did he seriously get this badass class only to be killed by William? That’ll honestly suck

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter

Afrisan

First?


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