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Side story 1: Order of the Malefic Viper (2/2)

🕑 Added 2020-11-22 16:02:35 +0000 UTC

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Zogarth

Fixed.

Duder

“I doubt any of you even know who I am I." [remove second "I"] “From today on, all of you will step in as active branch leaders,” the Malefic Viper said, as he felt the distress of the actual branch leaders behind in. [in >> him]

Zogarth

Fixed.

Corwin Amber

'to the distraught of many of them' distraught -> distress

Zogarth

Fixed.

BubblyGhost

degree -> decree fate a feeble -> is a The explanation simply*, as Duskleaf wasn’t mortal. -> was simple

Zogarth

Fixed!

Corwin Amber

'Get your deputes' deputes -> deputies 'depute Branch Leaders' depute -> deputy

Damian

maybe DuskLeaf will train Jake

Definitely (Not) a Necromancer

Oh duskleaf is a good one xD


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