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Chapter 82 - No rest for the wicked

🕑 Added 2020-11-25 18:31:07 +0000 UTC

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Zogarth

Edited the entire sentence a bit.

Corwin Amber

'our over lives' -> 'our lives over'

Vox De Harlequin

Man, Jacob is giving me some uncomfortable One True Way vibes.

Definitely (Not) a Necromancer

They will probably all die and Jacob gets wisked away with the help of the Mother and then he will use the soul's to get them all back to life... Its pretty easy as prediction on a story can go at this point i think... But i am still looking forward on how it is delivered x3

L Pedersen

I really hope that Jacob and all the crafters don't die. It would seem like such a waste to kill off literally all of the characters we meet in the tutorial. Even more so, the showdown between William and Jake is a done deal, everyone else dying serves no purpose. The only thing I can think of is William's original motivation, the highlander mentality of "There can be only one!" and that Jacob and the gang has to die so Jake can get the greatest tutorial reward. Eh. I'd honestly prefer Jake getting a super-awesome-amazing reward as a perk of being the main character rather than being the lone survivor in this case. Anyhow, I'm pretty sure the outcome has already been decided so I can only hope for the best. Also since I saw some of the author's notes on RR, I'm not bitching preemptively about the story or trying to be mean. I really enjoy the story and I look forward to seeing it reach 1000+ chapters!

Zogarth

Glad you liked the chapter! Fixed all of the suggested edits.

Joey McGowan

At least in terms of personal enjoyment for myself, at least. A lovely first showing of his legendary skill as well.

Joey McGowan

I think one of the important parts to a good mc in any action novel-for me at least-is the ability to enjoy and revel in combat and close calls.

Vaccus

Absolutely an amazing chapter. I LOVED Jakes first use of his skill, its was just so fucking epic and perfect. I also really love Jacobs part, it is making more and more interested in the conclusion of the tutorial.... just *chefs kiss* this was so good. Suggested edits As for other ingredients? What could be better than a lot of blood infused with Blood of the Malefic Viper? --> As for other ingredients, what could be better than a lot of blood infused with Blood of the Malefic Viper? ( I feel like having it be two questions is a little awkward, "as for other ingredients" I get can be verbally a question but written I think it needs a comma. If you wanted a more significant pause you could use a ; instead or a - as you like to do) second has passed. But to Jake, --> second *had* passed, but to Jake, It couldn’t see but could still feel that it had missed. --> It couldn’t see, but could still feel that it had missed. (pretty sure a comma always precedes but in this context?) And to make things worse, the beam --> To make things worse, the beam Jake, tired and spend, fell backward unto the grass. --> Jake, tired and spent, fell backward unto the grass. Something he didn’t disclose was just weird it was --> Something he didn’t disclose was just how weird it was for it to be so precise.

Zarik0

Damm he done some speech per day and he get lv 50 xDD the opiness Seriously lets go die because lets go die its fate, i dont knife the poor william when i can so lest just die now its salvation and hope. He get brainwashed hard by the holy mother man Its like the God of Hope in The Tutorial is Too Hard Hope is a wicked thing he need to create despear situation to exist Creating wicked/despear situation or letting them come when he can easely resolve them with just a little action, totaly become a Augur of Hope, he need despear to bulshit people and eat the hope he produce when brainwashe other. He cannot exist (be hope) without horrible situation, what a cursed and wicked class and personne he became by embracing it. (Fate bulshit, he need to let shit happen and maybe soon create it, he is just a sucker/recolter/parasite of the energie of hope (faith) for his new bulshit "holy" mother god

Sean Wilner

Ancient is below legendary which seems to be below divine (unique is something else and doesn't fit neatly into the rankings I think? Not super clear yet)

тђє v๏เ๔

What order of rarity are the skills in? Is it Common->Uncommon->Rare->Epic->Ancient->Legendary or is it Legendary and then Ancient? Thank you for the chapter

Amelgar

Did you mean William? I think without plot armor (divine interference) he would have been dead a long time ago. At least he hasn't struggled as much as Jake to get where he is

Amelgar

Wow, Jacob's class is rather malicious despite it's name

Josh Turple

Hope jacob doesn't die. He will be great on the outside stupid Jake and his shitty class. Without plot Armour will would wreck him.

Jonatan

The story mentions karma many times. Maybe you need to sever/give back all karma debts/promises if/when you ascends to godhood.

Impulsive Monkey

There are 53 people I think. All of the warriors are dead and then there are Jake, William, and Bertram as the only ones left as fighters

Walle159

Replying to 49th khan i thought I read the number of tutorial people left that is alive and it said three. I could be wrong. And I also thought William killed everyone so that I thought it happen.

The 49th Khan

What? These are the weaker fighters and non-combatants left over from the camps after William killed everyone else in the big fight. Where did you get that there were only three left?

Zogarth

Fixed it :p

CyclopsSlayer

Arrgh! I had written an involved commentary and then Patreon asked me to relogin and it was all lost... bah "They would meet the tornado outside, and they would greet." Greet what? Whom? Each other?

Zogarth

Fixed.

Thanks for the chapter . saddens me, but are that lost generation. But are that > but we are that

Walle159

Wait what chapter did Jacob meet other human. I’m confused I thought there were only 3 people in the tutorial.

Gabriel

Thanks!


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