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Chapter 84 - True Protagonist

🕑 Added 2020-11-27 15:46:13 +0000 UTC

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Zogarth

Fixed.

Corwin Amber

'he was a figure' was -> saw

Juli Freixi

Me too

Juli Freixi

Thanks a lot for the chapter

Danielle Warvel

Ah! I your comment made me realize that I should perhaps clarify some of my comments. I think Jacob it an idiot for going along with what is obviously a pseudo religion so easily (I mean, Jake has the right idea to think of them a just overwhelming powerful people, not actual gods) and I hate William because duh, you’re supposed to hate psychopaths, but I do not hate where the story is going so far, because the contrasts with all the other people in the tutorial so far is just making me admire Jake so far. I just like hating a hateable character or finding pathetic character pathetic. I still absolutely love the authors writing! I mean the characters personalities is obviously going to just be a matter of personal preference. There have been no plot holes or anything subpar about the writing itself. All the controversy just means people are really into the story! That’s actually an indication that you’re doing a good job!

joshjosh100

I like William

joshjosh100

When everyone has plot armor... no one has plot armor

PrimordialJay

I had to read that slowly a second time before I saw that it is 'was' and not 'saw'.

тђє v๏เ๔

I can't quite say i enjoyed this chapter. Pretty much the reason I'm reading now is to see how William will die 60% and the rest how it will turn out after the Tutorial with Jake being the sole survivor 40% 😂. Also, a heads up; I think you're gonna get a lot of shit for this chapter when it releases on RR, just ignore it and you do you. Thanks for the chappy! 😁

Matthew Bakewell

Please Kill William.... Also small typo: "final thing he was was a figure" - " final thing he saw was a figure"

Nobody

Jake better kill William before the end of the tutorial.

TheGreenKraken

Really looking forward to seeing them again in some fashion. It would be nice to see Jacob and Jake make some sort of organization in the future utilizing the Light pantheon and the Malific cult. I am enjoying this.

Puri Iresan

That‘s a lot of Plot armer and both sides.

L Pedersen

Well that wasn't very fun. All I have left to hope for at this point is that when you die in the tutorial you get sent back to earth, or held in limbo until the end and then sent back. In any case you might want to brace yourself for when this chapter is released on RR. If angry people on the internet made such an impact on you with chapter 29 and 53 then the backlash from this one will probably hurt. My advice would be to just ignore it. People are going to get mad and vent their feelings but you don't have to listen to it. If just one or two of them channel their feelings into giving some useful feedback then that would be nice but it's ultimately not worth it if it impacts your mental health. For myself, I can't say that I enjoyed this chapter, or those other previous ones that you caught so much hate for. But that seems like it's more of an issue for me than it should be for you. No one is forcing me to read your story. So you do you Zogarth and keep writing, I like your story and I'd like to see where it goes.

Joshua

It's clearly been explained by his vision and skills. The others are in the later and I assume that as long as the sould is tethered creating a body is easy. Now Jacob wasn't killed, he was slain, my take on it is you can kill something's body but if you don't fully destroy them you won't gain EXP like Will didn't. The obvious is that Jacob has gone to the mothers divine realm like that trapper did as he is obviously incredibly valuable to any religion or even cause with the lantern working as a sort of anchor for the rest to allow them to hitch a ride. Sorry I wrote so much, got really into that haha

Streetwise

1000% the guy is an unreserved sociopath with no redeeming qualities, you can't feel sad for him because he has no feeling. I guess that's 'fine' for a simple 'bad guy' but I think Jacob will be a better 'bad guy' when he does his miraculous return after the tutorial coming to 'redeem' our MC.

TheCommensuratePup

So other characters in a series make the series better. I know a lot of folk are hating on this chapter but this helps flush out the universe. I would like to know if the 50ish are actually dead or is this an ability of Jacob to give them some sort of stasis till the end of the tutorial.

Ikawaii

Die, Die, Die

WolfWithAGun

Williams character amuses me. He is actually played well, as an infinitely arrogant sociopath. He never even wondered if something was wrong with Jacob, or HOW that archer still didn't die with literally everyone trying to kill him. Which makes sense. William is to arrogant for that

Patrick Schuldt

So, I didn't bother read the chapter. I really hate William and can't even read that..

Anghwrtais

What's William's levels?

Kooooomakimi

but his internal organs still had been a long way to go. ------> should be: But his internal organs still had a long way to go.

sqeesqad

I'm honestly getting tired of this character

Zogarth

Fixed!

Vaccus

Awesome chapter! That was a great send off for jacob and the crafters, much better than a slaughter! Looking forward to the final battle! a few edits! few days before his limps started returning to peak --> few days before his limbs started returning to peak His still to absorb metals had --> His skill to absorb metals had He hoped they had no scattered to the winds --> He hoped they had not scattered to the winds Jacob and that warrior guy always around him. --> Jacob and that warrior guy whose always around him.

rams

I thought it was obvious that Jacob's class allowed everyone to escape the tutorial and be revived.

Seb

Yep, I'm really hoping that Jake will put him in his place and kill him...

"he had a feeling he would meet the Augur again sometime in the future" I hope that is either wrong or happens in an afterlife. If William lives through the tutorial, I will be sorely disappointed—he is an obnoxious character to read

i dont think they "died" tho cause of his class

Danielle Warvel

Don’t drink the kool-aid man. Never drink the Kool-aid. Also, ahem. DIE WILLIAM DIE!! DIE A HORRIBLE POINTLESS AGONIZING DEATH!!!

Impulsive Monkey

Fuck Jacob. He’s such a fucking bitch. All of them could’ve lived but he choose to let the psycho live instead. That was 50 GOOD fucking people and they were killed because he selfishly couldn’t. And now he gets to live and be a leader of a ducking cult.


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