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Chapter 87 - Dark Mana & Dark Tunnels

🕑 Added 2020-12-01 15:36:08 +0000 UTC

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Zogarth

Rewrote it a bit.

BubblyGhost

making the act do far more damage him himself too. -> ?

Zarik0

Yeah its nice, i love this part too Im a little off for the timetab of the story of some part. When in some part he take hours to move to point A to B or how many mn to do this type of action or movement And in other chapter he did this this and that and again that and barely time is passed (day) (action who suggest a long time have passed for logical timetab) and when you look about the total it seem way off im sure if one personne look this closely and get the addition done for the timetab (day by day) by action ist wrong in some place. (because some sentence rek the day time) Author need to be carefull with this for plausible story in the time aspect (afraid to get another inconsistant passage with another 3 days off her in the follow of the story)

Zogarth

Fixed.

Zogarth

Fixed.

Lexae

"The darkness that had blinded him was now only seemed like a mist to him, only slightly obscuring everything." This bad. "the darkness that had blinded him so far was now more like a mist, only slightly obscuring everything."

CyclopsSlayer

"than never before" than ever

Zogarth

What do you mean? Jake was clearly trying to bite his own head off! Fixed :p

Patrick camp

This seems off to me - “As he got below the rat, it dropped down silently as he tried to bite his head clean off.”

Vaccus

Awesome chapter! It is so exciting Jake is progressing with system-less magic. He seems to have a knack for turning all his situations into learning experiences. I did not see any edits from my end!

Zogarth

If not today then two tomorrow. I have had a super busy day and still have quite a few things I need to get done.

Pokox

Are we getting another chapter today?

thkiw

Yes Yes Yes

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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