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Side Story 3: Life after Death (Casper)

🕑 Added 2020-12-06 15:51:32 +0000 UTC

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Hazel Wolf

Wait, was that the Blightfather? Or did Eversmile just manage to screw with a system description?

BrokenMortal

So Casper only got his girlfriend back because of Jake. Interesting.

Zogarth

Only some of them.

John

will the $10 side-stories be unlocked over time for $5 tier?

Zogarth

Fixed.

Zogarth

Fixed. Glad you like em!

Duder

He wore a simple robe, but on his fingers, he wore a ring shining ring on each of a grade above anything Casper could even imagine. [remove first "ring"] Really loving these side stories! Great world-building I think! --WaitingforUpdates on RR

Definitely (Not) a Necromancer

Sooooo super cute my eyes nearly made tears

Zogarth

Fixed.

Zogarth

Fixed.

BubblyGhost

leading unto a balcony-> into these orbs have* off -> gave* the lich changed mana’s flow -> the mana's He had questioned for long why it was so -> rewrite but no -> now Identiciation -> Identification

Corwin Amber

'as a mortal architect' -> 'as mortal architects'

Zogarth

Fixed!

Vaccus

Ahh these side chapters are so good! this was more than i could have hoped for! edits! Teachers, shoulders, scholars, -->(not sure what to put, was Shoulders what you meant? Like shoulders to lean on?) culture has pained us in a --> culture has painted us in a We have already have enough --> we have already had enough would be a very audios path. --> would be a very arduous path. He had questioned for long why it was so… but he couldn’t find it. (kind of an awkward sentence) In combat, Casper wouldn’t fall himself --> In combat, Casper wouldn’t call himself He left the locket around --> He felt the locket around


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