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Chapter 118 - Second part?

🕑 Added 2021-01-06 13:52:49 +0000 UTC

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Mason Sudul

Welp jist binged the whole thing in a few days what a cliffhanger you fungaloid XD

Zogarth

Fixed.

Jess_2037

“That was then “ should be “that was when” It’s at the end

Zogarth

Fixed.

Vaccus

ancient-rarity of all went well.-->ancient-rarity if all went well.

Zogarth

Fixed. Was meant to be worms :p

Jordan

he felt like his entire stomach was invaded by a million small works -> sharks. I'm guessing that's what you ment.

Zogarth

Fixed.

Nice chapter bro! I can’t wait to read what happens in the next one!

Grammarmelade

A skill that was rare by default and only grew [some->from] there. [of->if] all went well.

StonedKnight

Thanks for the chapter

Zogarth

Damn you word!

CyclopsSlayer

"the 93rduniverse, " - needs a space " Primordials" - Primordial's "A point when reached" - 'that when' insert that "them carry strong potential inherently." - move 'inherently' to after 'them' "Jake, in his well-justified ignorance, of course, didn’t know any of this. He didn’t understand many things, and in some ways, that lack of understanding had strength in itself. He wasn’t aware of what he could do. Nor what he couldn’t or shouldn’t be able to." LOL!!! In an old tabletop RPG 'Fantasy Trip' the description of the Gargoyles applies to Jake quite well; (sic) "Being made of stone they were far too heavy to fly. However, being far too stupid to know this, they flew anyways." Hehe "couldn’t see it end well." - ending "exhausted for not " - from

Hudie

Oh damn

Ranzbart

worth it

thanks

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter!


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