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Intermission 3 - Eron

🕑 Added 2021-01-10 14:38:48 +0000 UTC

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BlackFire13th

This is what the viper meant about “anything but a true resurrection”? Sounds worse than necromancy.

thkiw

Well... he probably wouldn't survive as a healer alone. As a necromancer he has a chance. Sad he had to go *kuku*.

Jess Koch

That’s never a good sigh

George

damn that took a dark turn

V

glad not all of them are mentally okay

Zogarth

Fixed.

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter 'He had perhaps always' had -> was 'liked to look' in context 'watch' sounds better, but might not work for this (just a suggestion) 'one day where' where -> when 'perhaps not used for' used -> use 'with them being alive' with -> without (i think you meant this) 'Their souls having lost left the body' <- awkward sentence

Zogarth

We have many that don't have that many deaths. Side story 6 is one such example.

SFS

First thing I want to say is I've enjoyed these intermission. I feel like they have been a good way to introduce important charscters and concepts to the story. The second thing is that I'm curious if all these tutorials are going to be this bloody. So far they have like a 99% death rate. Are they going to get back to earth and find like 10 people there, or are there only a few that are actually this bad?

Raymond Horn

A necromancer is an interesting new character especially when we already have an undead character. Though based on how it was described it seems like the undead might uncharacteristically be against necromancy. Should be fun. Thanks for another chapter of this great story.

Franké Joseph

Ohh necromancer origin story done right. I like the whole "Road to hell is paved with good intentions" angle you're going for.

Zogarth

Fixed. But you spelled it wrong too :p

Ranzbart

"There was a distinct lack of any axillary items, though. " -> auxillary ?? or did you mean to use a strange word for cars?


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