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Chapter 122 - Homecoming

🕑 Added 2021-01-12 14:04:59 +0000 UTC

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Jeremy M

Cheers! Thanks for the chapter!

Zogarth

Fixed.

Jeremy M

Should "There is a lot of skills out there." Be "There are a lot of skills out there." ?

Zogarth

Fixed.

Albert Garcia

About time. Looking forward to the tutorial finally being over

CyclopsSlayer

" my inquire related" - inquiry "Earth alone for now. He just still felt a bit… alone." - it is best to not use the same word in close proximity, maybe make it 'lonely' ?

CryoHydra357

If he makes a big enough name for himself he can draw his family to his location.

Patrick Schuldt

'Do we numbers hm survived? I think the deathrate is around 60-70 %. Alone these leader quests will kill so many people.

TheCommensuratePup

I look forward to seeing the bonds he makes going forward. I hope he gets a wife, and I'd love to see him actually make use of the township thing with his lord title.

V

we can see earth tomorrow finally

Zogarth

Fixed.

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter 'time spend in the temple' spend -> spent

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter. I'm assuming that when Jake meets him again he will be unable to stop himself from asking whether Casper is a friendly ghost? :-p

Zogarth

Fixed. Should also be "possibly" in the last one :p

An_Amazing_Username

The voice was overpowering yet gently: gently -> gentle Holy shit, did he want that skill. : This doesn't flow well, maybe more like he wanted powerful, possible sapient being with their own agenda : being -> beings

Sial28

I'm not really crying. In fact a good cliffhanger is a must

L Pedersen

What wouldn't be a cliffhanger? The chapter has to end somewhere, in this case we had a little arc of Jake spending time with his godbros between the tutorial arc and return to earth arc. Sincere question, not trying to be a dick but people cry cliffhanger all the time on serial stories as if chapters should never end.

Grammarmelade

Was wondering the same thing...

Sial28

Great chapter. Thanks Cliffhanger, sniff

Zogarth

Fixed.

Lictor Magnus

material existence -> material assistance

Walle159

Cliffhanger 😭😭😭

Zogarth

Fixed.

Hudie

In the part about casper you wrote boy instead of body

Zogarth

Fixed.

Zogarth

Fixed, and I did edit a few minor things in the first quarter too.

Nim

Excellent info and content! Some awkward phrasing / sentences in the first quarter or so, in the conversation with Villy; maybe just reread it (out loud helps me, fwiw) for flow? Archlight -> Archlich, toward the end

sqeesqad

How will the gravity be affected by the change?

Ethan Detrick

Very exciting to finally be out of the tutorial arc and enter this new one

kataklyst

Archlight -> Archlich

Zy

Can't wait for the next one!

Danielle Warvel

Man, this is one of those times I’m really craving a mass release.

Anki

Thanks for the chapter Zogarth! Bribery is awesome!

Ben Allen

Rock on

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter!


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