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Chapter 123 - The Blue Marble

🕑 Added 2021-01-13 14:28:33 +0000 UTC

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Zogarth

Fixed... but why give edits for old chapters? XD

Corwin Amber

'All remember how' remember -> remembered

Adam Daw

This chapter ruled!

Grevis165

Friendship is magic :-)

RottenTangerine

Great chapter! Every few chapters I read one and go "yup, this is the reason I subbed." This is definitely one of those chapters. I'm very curious to see what the future holds for this story. Thanks for writing

Damn, now I need to wait from at least 20 chapters to be released so I can binge.

Grammarmelade

Whoop, whoop, new arc!

TheCommensuratePup

That was one awesome ending of a chapter.

Zogarth

Fixed. Also, what non-humans we talking about?

thkiw

Good chapter

The 49th Khan

"Mike felt a shiver run down his "spike" as he saw those eyes." Meeting the non humans already I see.

Zogarth

Fixed.

Corwin Amber

'tutorial was shithole' -> 'tutorial was a shithole'

Jordan

Thanks for the chapter, it's a great start to his return to Earth.

Zogarth

The side stories are very cool and many are very tied into the main story :p

Vaccus

I loved this chapter Z, I am so excited for post - tutorial.

Red Bombadil

There were several points where Jacob’s class/progression felt forced, but I love seeing him returning with all of it here in this chapter. My vote is for Jacob to do the managerial work at Jakes mini-kingdom so Jake doesn’t get tied down in city development and forced socialization.

Meprster

Please Zorgath my friend give more chapters to $10 patrons. I will become a $10 Patreon immediately for more! I'm an addict and you are the only supplier!

Zogarth

Fixed.

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter 'Jake had been described' -> ' Jake had had described' 'I took spent the' -> 'I spent the'

Zogarth

Fixed.

CyclopsSlayer

"he exasperated the situation" - exacerbated (make worse)

David C

I just hope he doesn’t party up. I love his lone-wolf style and I really don’t want that to change.

Cirex123

Glad they cleared the air. I hate conflict based only on misunderstandings.

TheJammiest2

he is getting desperate

L Pedersen

Willing to exchange sexual favors for more chapters.

Ben Waschuk

Thanks for the chapter. It was was nice to see some quick interactions before everyone goes their own way. Im excited and looking forward to see where this story goes :)

Brad

So glad that Casper and Jake still see each other as friends.

mhaj58

Hope Jake starts making some actual human friends. He shouldn't face the new world on his own

Zogarth

Edited it a bit. Meant to convey that it is an evolved insect.

Seb

Yeah and I'm really happy that Jake and Casper got to see each other and stay friends!

"Four powerful legs of what had once a small water strider held it open. At the same time opened its tiny mouth" and "At the same time IT opened" ? not sure about both

An_Amazing_Username

Cool, I know it's redundant but this story keeps getting better! Maybe I should just expect that by now but my god what a story.

Vox De Harlequin

It's good to see Casper's time with the ArchLich has done him well.

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter!


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