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Chapter 110 - Fall

🕑 Added 2020-12-29 15:02:00 +0000 UTC

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Damian

“not a single part of his body not coated in dark green scales” hehe, must have been hard.

Zogarth

True, fixed (tried to make a pun, but hand is correct).

CyclopsSlayer

"actual pain on one claw. " - was there only a single instance where the King felt pain, or did you mean a single hand/paw? Claw - noun a curved pointed horny nail on each digit of the foot in birds, lizards, and some mammals.

MagicWafflez

my dude. stop reading. go read something else if you don't like it.

8Psycho

This whole fight was disappointment. 1. I can't believe I have to say this but when you poison someone, you no longer have to fight them. Just wait for them to die/weaken. That's how poison works. 2. King was weakened to the point that even his megablasts only push MC a little. He is clearly spent. Where the heck did he get the mana to cast soul MAGIC on the whole tutorial zone? 3. Broken bones. After breaking them MC for some reason jumped straight into fight, as if it was not even worth mentioning. Did they regenerate already? Did they mend properly? Broken bones mend extremely slowly, if MC regenerates bones in real time, why would he ever need Health potions? 4. Extremely clunky fight that was padded up to conclude in 'fate fulfilled', which has me disappointed, as even if next chapter MC will stand up it will just mean that Viper simply did not see far enough ahead, not that his prophesy was wrong. Which is extremely stupid waste of vague prophesy. All the talk about subverting fate, tsk.

Brad

Yeah I am somewhat expecting his bloodline to take over. He then rips the King apart.

Dominic French

Ah finally the end of freaking prophecy and destiny. That is literally one of my most hated concepts. I hope jake eats this prophecy, shits it out, and gets all the stronger in spite of it. I also hope he does it with his friend Augur prophecy shenanigans in the future lol

Zogarth

Fixed.

Zogarth

Fixed.

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter 'other hand. The hunter' -> 'other hand the hunter' 'all he knew that'-> 'all he knew was that' 'innate abilities talents' <- 'innate talents' or 'innate abilities' (or something else) 'and now was certainly not the day' -> either 'now'->'today' OR 'day'->'time'

The suspense is killing me

RottenTangerine

Great chapter! Waiting another day to read the next will be difficult though...

hurting his own fist as must as the King -> hurting his own fist as (much) as the king. Great chapter all together though can’t wait for the next!

joshjosh100

You have surpassed Re: Zero is making me hate and love every chapter

thanks!!!

Zarik0

Yeah he is a Primordial hunter, no way his bloodline dont awaken and slap this puny creature magic Blood, blood for the god of blood!

Chloe Berry

While this is a key chapter in the plot, there are a lot of issues with its writing. The perspective is supposed to be from the king, but occasionally jumps to Jake for a brief moment. I'm also uncertain the king even knew Jake's name. If you want to include things from Jake's perspective, you need to move that to a separate section dedicated to his view - you can't mix it in the middle with the king's.

Beowulf

Well done. Thank you.

Im the smallest peach

Please don't leave us dangling from the cliff, one more please!

Give us another chapter, i'm dying to know how this ended, not only the fight

Danielle Warvel

The bloodline won’t stand for that shit.

Seb

I hope so! I really want to see that tree dead

TheGreenKraken

Now thats a cliffhanger

Zogarth

Fixed the accursed limp...

Somerito

I'm assuming bloodline shenanigans next chapter

Jeremy M

Well done! Wonder if Jake is going to still find a way to cinch that win

Hedincool

No. Please. No. No. Just one more. ONE.

An_Amazing_Username

Limp should be limb i think. Also great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next. That ending as well, seems like it's foreshadowing.

TheJammiest2

thanks for the chapter!

Alexander Zeheter

Damn, what a cliffhanger

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter!


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