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Chapter 130 - Going down

🕑 Added 2021-01-22 13:41:14 +0000 UTC

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You really, really like 'if I say so myself', if I say so myself. Jake here thinks those words, and in the previous chapter the new folks also did, multiple times. It's a bit jarring.

Amadhe

Thanks for le chappy though.

Amadhe

Nope nope nope, na nope de nope nope. I hat3 insects.

Talen Drake

Is he going to choose Charizard to fight Scyther?

CyclopsSlayer

Hmm, a location for a proto-dungeon. Or even a second pylon.

Zogarth

Fixed stuff.

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter 'someone liked Hank' liked -> like 'In there, however' there -> here 'since last' -> 'since last time' OR 'since previously' 'them had duck only' duck -> ducked OR 'had duck' -> 'were ducked'

Zogarth

Edited it a bit.

Oliver Gray

Good chapter though! Looking forward to a bit of group dynamic again, even if it’s only temporary !

Oliver Gray

“They hadn’t had more than a bit more than two months to grow after all.” —> sounds a little odd maybe “ they hadn’t had more than a bit over two months.”?

An_Amazing_Username

This was a cool chapter, I'm looking forward to his underground adventures.

Luke Scheffe

Thanks for the chapter!!!

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter!


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