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Chapter 136 - How To Train Your Dragon Wings

🕑 Added 2021-02-01 13:30:58 +0000 UTC

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Zogarth

Fixed.

Grammarmelade

The mere fact that he could think of that version as a lunatic [was] perhaps proof enough he wasn’t.

Amelgar

I'd say the choosing the skills is rather important. Since it will tie into any future combat and their not exactly easy to come by. It's nice to see him reason through them because I sure had no clue which to choose when I first saw them

Emby

Yeah the skill choosing chapters are such a bore. Good the first couple times, yet now thr author keeps reusing the same gimmick over and over. Its not new anymore, just filler.

Rickard Gustavsson

It's always like that when he selects a skill, it takes up like 50-75% of the chapter and I usually just skim over the annoyingly wordy introspection..

Bacardi Baiju

These chapters almost feel like fillers - One whole chapter for him to select skills (lot of pointless exposition) and another chapter where nothing happens other than him trying out the skill. I really hope that the author moves the story along - other character POVs are good just that don't fall into the pit of making other characters one dimensional - It will hurt you down the line. Looking forward to more chapters. Thanks author for regular updates

Alan Kaiser

'tis revenge for the tutorial birds

Zarik0

He terrorize the little bird, bad guy bad guy :)

Zogarth

Fixed.

Nate maresch

I really like the first citizens of unnamed city. They add to the story, feels organic now.

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter 'still ways to go' -> 'still a ways to go' OR 'still had a ways to go'

GuyWhoReadsALot

I like this story a lot, you do a good job of making even the slice of life stuff interesting. Not everyone writing these kind of stories can manage that.

SpaceGoddess76

Shouldn’t the skills he got from the tutorial go under something more like general skills? Since they aren’t 100% related to his class & even if he lost his class he’d still have them.

Zogarth

Fixed them. Thanks for the edits... and I should really stop reading stuff through at 3 am.

Elmhedera

...sure [that >> what] the hell it meant... ...when you fail [it >> at] flying... [-Both-] [H]is stamina was getting relatively low at this point. It hadn’t been topped [out >> up]... He [-was-] still [had] ways to go before he would be able to... [Dungeoneer IV], [Dungeon Pioneer IV] (thought he beat five Dungeons not four?) ...he thought as he once more thought [-out-] if he should really not be out looking for his family. ...downsides of [mediation >> meditation]... ...his sphere [with >> which] allowed... Windows [was >> were] the most challenging part...

Detrox

Nice


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