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Chapter 137 - I Believe I Can Fly

🕑 Added 2021-02-02 14:17:07 +0000 UTC

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Just a tough of mine: It would be nice that the Hawk is training Jake because it's need his help to kill a D-rank flying beast and then becomming a sort of familiar

SpaceGoddess76

I hope the Hawk becomes some sort of partner. Something liked a tamed animal but more like equals rather than master/servant. I’d still like to see some sort of contract between them that is system certified.

There was a comment from the last chapter something like poor little bird being harassed. I had agreed with the sentiment. Little did we know, lol. I hope the bird sticks around

Hunter Vook

Wholesome

Dave_S

Great chapter. Looking forward to see more of their interaction!

Zogarth

I do wonder... why did they feel like filler if this does not? None of it is filler or ever meant to be and I quite frankly don't get why it would be seen as such.

Joshua Green

This was a good chapter. Really enjoyed it. The last few updates seemed almost like "filler".

silder

The hawk might be my new favorite character <3

Eofad

Hurray for animal friends! I hope the hawk becomes a long term character.

Zogarth

Fixed.

_mori

Hope he doesn’t get lost lol.

Elmhedera

...it sped up and [heading >> headed] straight for the top of his head. Landing on the ground once more, he spectacularly failed [once more >> again] as he crashed into a tree. (Repetition of 'once more') Jake considered for a moment [of >> if] potions... Was [he >> him] flapping his damn wings so insulting? ...with a blast of [winds >> wind] without any complaint. ...Jake made a mighty flap, shooting [it >> him] up in the air. ...or blowing [s >> a] small gust of wind into itself to turn faster. A wish he decided to respect [-the hawk’s decision-]. ...pecking [his >> him] over and... ...good 40 [potion >> potions] in total... Not that it had [no >> any] particular effect on his vision...

Azareck

How to tame a winged human.

Alex Hignett

I thoroughly enjoyed this chap, thank you!

Storyhunter

Sir hawk wanted a companion in the sky. He should look to creating a roost in his exclusive zone.

Zogarth

Fixed.

kataklyst

pecking his over -> pecking him over 40 potion -> 40 potions no particular effect -> any particular effect

TheCommensuratePup

Hawks and rangers are natural allies. I like seeing Jake make friends.

Oiva Metsola

Wow, Im like, Super impressed by this chapter. The interactions between the Hawk and Jake were not at all corny and flowed well. This chapter also gives Jake more character. Just a fun chapter 10/10

Alphafenrir401

Aaaw Jake made a bird friend

Patrick Schuldt

Different pacing but I like it!

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter!


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