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Chapter 140 - A Cloudy Forecast

🕑 Added 2021-02-05 13:29:00 +0000 UTC

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Bob

I found this hard to read. Even the meer mention of a school arc just instantly killed this for me.

Grevis165

I like that Jake was ineffective against this enemy. I also like that you have a cloud island and he's exploring the freaking sky! It would be funny to see some oversized grass or BB Corn at some point ;-)

Vox De Harlequin

That's almost literally what Infused Powershot does, and it had negligible effect due to it still being primarily a physical attack. Making an arrow out of mana directly would be a better bet, but that still feels like it would be putting a needless complication into it if he didn't just imbue velocity into it but shot it with his bow.

Mike

Wouldn't infusing his arrows with mana work ? It would maybe be the next step to upgrade his archery skill

Zogarth

Nah, I meant countered. Like videogame-countered when you meet someone who has a counter-build to your own.

Corwin Amber

'he was countered' did you mean concerned?

Leeland

I really hope Jake manages to get an attack with some kind of poison-mana or mana-poisoning to stay on theme :)

Zogarth

Fixed.

Bunny Waffles

Yeaaaah. He definitely needs to get his hands on some sort of proper magic attack. Dodnt even think about the fact with all this wacky fantasy stuff there was gonna be creatures and beings made of pure elemental energy and therefore pretty much immune to physical damage.

тђє v๏เ๔

So does this mean he will get a magic attack or something like poison with anti-magical properties? I mean that gotta exist right? Thank you for the chapter:)

Elmhedera

His belief in that theory stemming [-came-] from the... ...to see where it began and [when >> where] it ended. ...[stuck >> struck] by bursts of electricity... ...acting as an epicenter [of >> for] the entire continent. (Or 'the epicenter') ...quick [Identity >> Identify] proved they weren’t. While observing [others’ >> others] hunt was entertaining... It kicked up smoke as the cloud dispersed upon being hit and [forcing >> forced] Jake back. (Or 'being hit, forcing Jake') ...one of the [function >> functions] of [wings >> Wings] he hadn’t tried before. He burned the blood within them, as the mist was slowly coming out of them. (Sentence doesn't really make sense in the context of things) ...flapped his [winds >> wings] and sent... Maybe Descending Dark Fang would [go >> do] damage... ....did nothing to [do >> the] elemental. Carefully approaching the elemental, he dodged the blasts of steam as he [approached >> neared] its lower body. (Repetition) Right into [-his-] him as he stood...

Connor Bruha

Thanks for the chapter!

MahoganyWood

Thanks for the chapter

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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