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Side Story 10 - A Brief Look at 10 of the Most Dominant Races of the Multiverse

🕑 Added 2021-02-07 13:21:54 +0000 UTC

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HentaiAddict

I imagine these indispensable beings in the automata are producers that create other automata, ones that are better at creating than others, save for rigoria

Phil Ritter

I’m really dying to know more about the Automata. It was mentioned before that they have certain individuals in their empire they can’t loose no matter what just like the Endless Empire. But while I understand the Ectonas because loosing a true Royal would mean potentially loosing control of huge portions of their armies, what makes those gods from the Automata legion so special and indispensable

Miles Mouton

What about dwarves? Vampires? I'm assuming this means in terms of populations they are not as prominent

Linbi

I really liked this one, I would love to see more lore texts in the future

Sterban Friz

Is the king in the tutorial a unique lifeform?

Zogarth

Fixed

Duder

I love this and I hope there are more tome/texts to come!

Duder

The latter will often only result in some race skills and different stat gains, while the latter can lose either class or profession, though they often a fusion of the two. >> though they are often a fusion A powerful race with incredibly magical and physical power >> A powerful race with incredible magical ...

Zogarth

Fixed stuff, thanks. I knew this one was quite rough.

Johnny Smithers

"For a member, the enlightened races to change their race is often challenging." --> "For a member of the enlightened races, changing their race is often challenging." "Elementals are beings of mana. They only have a single resource in their mana, and their bodies are weapons in themselves" the wording here is a bit rough IMO, maybe "Elementals are beings of mana, which is their only resource. This allows their bodies themselves to become weapons." or something. " Their stat gains equally spread and the race itself providing nearly no skills." This isn't a complete sentence, it needs a verb. Try, " Their stat gains are equally spread and the race itself provides nearly no skills." "Within this race, the most noteworthy Is," Is--->is. "the undead has become a powerful race " wrong tense. has--->have "Many new Risen comes from enlightened races willingly becoming undead and joining their race." comes -->come

Zogarth

Fixed, and thanks!

it most once more reiterated certain elven er ectognamorph starborne subraces -(:) Starborne Humans, ... It merely a name The articles has taken certain liberties

Zogarth

Fixed. I know there are quite a few things in this chapter overall...

Vaccus

Yet that automata knew understood --> yet that autmata understood Rigoria kept began creating more --> Rigoria began creating more

Zogarth

Fixed.

Silvertooth09

are viewed even viewed as -> are even viewed as

happy cuddled senko pillow

okay got it! "*beat a being from the void when jake reach godhood"

Zogarth

Fixed.

Nim

Obtain races, professions or both -> classes, professions or both?

Zogarth

Fixed.

Littleme02

There is simply not being enough


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