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Chapter 144 - Not Again

🕑 Added 2021-02-11 13:48:36 +0000 UTC

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Zir

ya, this degree of bloodlust seems insane to me. maybe the apex eye or the king mask is fucking with his mind. also villy is super territorial so it could be because of that.

Zogarth

Fixed.

Elmhedera

...told to [say >> stay] away... ...right back in [this >> his] face.

тђє v๏เ๔

Or, or... a third option, a message to get his ass back perhaps? Lol

V

the end is a little tough to get down but he doesn’t know what we do so it’s understandable im guessing they’re getting attacked

Sebastian Prue

I think he reacted in line with his character for the most part except the instant murder mindset he had. It would be more in line for him to be angry, confused and demanding answers than wanting to kill them

Damian Btooks

Lol

Tomer Yud

you thought right

Zogarth

Still no?

userunfriendly

Sorry Z, I’m posting edits using my iPad, and this limits my text field. ^_^

Zogarth

No?

userunfriendly

The elemental ripped in countless pieces by telepathy as a shockwave of mental energy crushed both of their souls to nothingness. HIMSELF AND HAWKIE ripped in countless pieces by telepathy as a shockwave of mental energy crushed both of their souls to nothingness.

Zogarth

Rewrote the sentence a bit.

userunfriendly

And the conclusion he reached was the mental image of the Roc being torn apart by the golden claw. And the conclusion he reached was the mental image of HIMSELF being torn apart by the golden claw.

userunfriendly

Corwin seems to be out today. ^_^ He imagined how the King. He imagined the King.

Jeno Abada

Its probably the only scenario where it makes sense. Jakes insight and perception should have been enough to think of this happening.

I think he missed a scenario. Bad people finding the city and they need help. No communication method available so fuck it let's use the pylon to call him back.

Vega

Not really? When he allowed them to stay he gave miranda power to look after herself. He doesn’t have to make sure they are safe. Just giving them an opportunity given how socially awkward he is pretty nice. Also I am at least partially convinced there is at least a tiny bit of system given anger in the situation.

happy cuddled senko pillow

that is 99% what will happen and 1% that she just want to call him about his cabin completion

Albert Botha

I reckon there are people down there who didn't fuckn listen!

Romen Martin

Jake needs to learn to chill. When he allowed them to stay he accepted that he had to make sure they're safe that was the set up has he even checked up on them?

Dikfor

Betting his little city has visitors and Miranda used the pylon contesting to call him back.

Sad that I’m all caught up. Love the story, will follow with interest.

I had that same thought, because ol girls intuition already told her that would be a bad idea

Tommy Littlefield

obviously triggered that to get his attention I’m guessing people showed up and attacked or at least just showed up and were scary enough to take this action

Phill barr

I think that the author has done it right because if it was as others had said then there whould be a lot less interest in this part of the story.

Torbjørn Nilsen

What? He has no reason to return in 7 days? His house would be complete in 7 days, yes. Only reasonable thing is that some powerfull people apeared and she needed help.

Khress

I am pretty sure this was used because they need him, like a sos beacon. Jake in his anger could not see that

Adevna

I see a bunch of whining from people about how they would have liked the story to happen... Which is strange, because it's not their story to tell. They don't even know where this is going, or how it will resolve. No serious commitments have been made in the narrative. But, boy do they have opinions.

Bence

I reserve my right to call his reaction completely out-of-character BS, until we see his response to the situation at hand.

Netveiwer

Is it bad that when i read him seeing the message I could hear "Let the bodies hit the floor!" In the background?

Viria

Well, he does have an even higher social anxiety than his Perception stat, and with that comes the inevitable "jumping to the worst case scenarios when it comes to interpersonal relationships". But I agree, this is pretty dense even for him ...

Swinter

Do you really mean him to come across as a braindead idiot? Because that's what you're doing here. "Only two reasons" Yeah, I get that you want to inject some excitement into it, but a child could find the third and most logical issue. There's something else hostile there. I can't believe this is the same guy who can somehow manage complex alchemy. Because right now, he acts like he was dropped on the head one too many times as a baby. Edit: Just want to add that my main problem with it is the murderous rage he shows. He has so far not shown any desire to go and murder people when he doesn't have to or when they've attacked him. As I wrote as an answer to another guy: Here, he decides to just... Kill them no matter what. And he wants to do it right away. Without even taking 30 seconds to consider WTF is going on :D. Socially awkward does not usually mean "Murder everyone". Because it would be cold-blooded murder. Everything else has been justifiable at the very least as self defence.

Lord Falco

Idiot. A week doesn’t mean 9 days. It means 7. I hope he’s suitably chagrined once he figures out whatever is actually going on.

Jacob Flaherty

My bet is hostiles showed up and she wants him back to help

Loric

Shouldn’t his high perception and bloodline be helping him with mana problems as well? I understand perception doesn’t equal comprehension but i would think that high perception means you can easily perceive more details about the mana which would lower the bar for comprehension. You’ve hinted this is the case in how he could slowly start to see the flow of mana in his sphere but when he’s actually training with it, his sphere and perception stat in general seems to do fuck all...

Zogarth

Fixed.

Curtis Cairns

hes gonna hit the ground like a comet take everything in his sphere in and then hes gonna be so annoyed he jumped the gun

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter Am the only one that thinks that the system desparately needs the ability to send messages between the owner and the head of the city? Since this looks more like a 'we need to talk' and there is no way for the message to be sent :) 'wasn’t sure what it was going' what -> where OR going -> doing (not sure which you meant) 'Each them far' -> 'Each of them far'

Jason Bryant

The cliffhanger! Grrrrrr

Nim

Yep

Ikawaii

I'm guessing it's a SOS signal

He really needs to start to think out of the box alright... He can't think in other directions besides the obvious ones... You left them there without protection this is one, without a way to contact you this is two and the last one the so called city lord you left her without a way to show her power, after all it's clear that people will start to come. The meaning of that contest for the pylon is clearly a way to inform you that shit happened and you should hurry back, well if they are not stupid enough to challenge you. Still I can understand how he feels.

_mori

I’m guessing she was in a situation where she needed him to return immediately. They might have visitors that aren’t behaving too well. She also has an intuition skill and last chapter she basically said that she wasn’t remotely willing to contest the pylon. Plus she’d probably know if he died, so it likely isn’t a mistake.

M van Dongen

Yep it sure got his attention.

Patrick Schuldt

I thought they are attacked and it's the only way to call him 🤷🏻‍♂️

Curtis Cairns

she did it to call him for visitors?

Daniel Tickle

That is how I'd read it. It's not like she can just call him up in the post apocalypse :D

CryoHydra357

Isn't she just trying to get his attention?

Damian

Oof bad idea to get his attention to come back


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