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Chapter 185 - Progress For Everyone!

🕑 Added 2021-04-01 11:24:17 +0000 UTC

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Michael

That... would be pretty gangsta.

James Faulkner

Can’t wait for our protagonist to tell someone to “fuck off” later down the line only to accidentally wipe them from existence

Oz

“Chanting and Incantations were apparently pretty standard among mages.” Not sure if the capitalization of incantations is purposeful or not.

Oz

Also, if she does only have one mental skill you should get rid of the word some, or add the word “effects” after it and ignore the other correction.

Oz

“Willpower also made some of her existing mental-skill stronger, which would help her do her job as a City Lord more efficiently.” Mental-skills. Also, the hyphen seems unnecessary and not how the story is usually structured? I might just be forgetting, but I’m pretty sure when mental skills were mentioned in the past, it was without a hyphen.

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

If I don't see any FUS RO DAH's! after this chapter, i'm gonna be so disappointed Thanks for the chapter~

Zogarth

It has been shown to not work on any D-grades so far.

Did the rule about being able to identify levels up to 1.5 times your own get retconned? If not, why does the Stormsong Hawk's level not show up?

flssdd

how?

Balsamic ThunderThighs

The Words of Power ability makes me wonder if we'll see any person on Earth blessed by another dragon. Or rather a natural born dragon. (Villy's a dragon too but he wasn't born one)

Ikit Claw

(in America) shoots school

Zogarth

Fixed

Chill59

Verdant magic is a (school) of magic...

Zogarth

Fixed

Corwin Amber

'that understand upturned' understand -> understanding 'she got work' -> 'she got back to work' OR 'she returned to work'

Zogarth

Fixed.

Zogarth

His name is Snappy :( Also, Jake has a wonderful naming sense.

An_Amazing_Username

Thanks for the chapter tug -> tuck

Bailey Lowe

Oh my god I only just got that Jake and Villy have the same naming sense, Hawkie, Mystie, Sylphie and Villys mate Snappie

Bobtur

Thanks for the chapter ! Now Hawkie should be renamed Stormie !


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