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Chapter 186 - One Step Closer

🕑 Added 2021-04-02 07:40:41 +0000 UTC

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James Faulkner

BURN THE FUNGUS (tftc)

Zogarth

Fixed, and thanks!

Zogarth

Thanks, fixed some things!

Thank you for the chapter. Here's some edit suggestions. In the same vein, being small made you susceptible to being bodied. being body slammed? to having someone else throw their weight around? to being muscled around by someone larger? being bodily maneuvered? He still needed a bit of Purified Water for when he mixed in the ash, as otherwise, the entire concoction would become way too solid to work with. delete the second comma in that sentence and it works better to me. One step closer, Jake Thought. I’m coming for you.... Probably should decapitalize the Thought.

Thanks for the chapter!

Thank you for the chapter. Hawkie no longer utterly unmatched…-> outmatched stepping an arrow -> stepping on an arrow

Sebas Tian

Some people are just weird man, like those pineapple on pizza people.

Zogarth

Y, fixed.

kataklyst

slightly nodding the mana -> nudging?

Danielle Warvel

I’m totally with Jake on the fungi hatred. I mean it’s bad enough they taste like dirt and have a revoltIng smell and texture. Mushrooms eat decomposing matter, basically anything rotting. And people still eat them!

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Swiftato

The end of the chapter got me kinda hyped so I started wondering whether this story had a patreon so that I could read the next chapters ahead. Then I remembered where I'm reading this and felt like an actual monkey

TheCommensuratePup

Eat all the mushrooms, absorb their powers and conquer all the mushroom worlds!!

Puri Iresan

I think the evolution is like 2-3 chapters away

Nah that's still like 10 chapters out... Have to fight the big mushroom, then level alchemy a few more times, then evolution.

Michael

I'm sure Villy is sad about Jake's intense desire to kill the mushroom. Jake should have to eat it after, as penance for his mushroom hating ways.

Zogarth

Fixed. Damn is editing on a phone hard

Silvertooth09

Thanks for the chapter. next chapter evolution time?

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter!

Corwin Amber

'down formation to' formation -> formations 'in its evolved form' its -> his 'offloading the Sylphie' -> 'offloading Sylphie'

roxurio10003

Ultimate Nemesishroom Killer

Bobtur

Thanks for the early chapter !

Why posted so early? Thanks!!

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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