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Chapter 187 - Sylphian

🕑 Added 2021-04-04 11:44:16 +0000 UTC

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James Faulkner

Sylphie is adorable ❤️ TFTC!

Make Jake a Bone Dagger, soaked in His blood and another one with the MV Touch.

I think someone may have noticed the foreshadowing! Practical concerns mean the smith would probably need poison resistance gear. :D

Loving each chapter! Here's some minor suggestions to consider and potentially implement. He didn’t delay quickly bottling up the fungicide. didn't delay in quickly didn't delay, quickly bottling No, he wanted just to be a damn great alchemist. Sounds a bit better as either wanted to just be a  (emphasis on wanting only that) just wanted to be a  (emphasis on only wanting that... minor difference either way, but it sounded like you were going for the first one). Once more, she had proven how great she truly was! It rewarded the human back by mercifully reciprocating his affection. Great and benevolent! I think it flows better to take the italics off of benevolent, so that the emphasis is more balanced, on the focus that there are 2 qualities, not merely greatness. Jake scratched the proud bird as she cutely nuzzled up to him happily What is the happily? Jake? Or the bird? If Jake, then Jake happily scratched.... (sounds better to me than the next option, really). if the bird, then as she cutely and happily nuzzled up to him

William

Wonder if that smith could make weapons by soaking it in jakes blood

Uncommon potions would take a few months though, and he specializes in poison so potions are secondary. He also has the archery skills to upgrade. Some of them are quite bad

Jonathan

Seems to me that a thing he would want to do before evolving is to get some of the experience for the remaining Alchemist levels by getting his concoct potion skills to uncommon as well.

Arrogant Savant

A chapter right as I am about to sleep I love and hate you author

Balsamic ThunderThighs

Ah How wholesome. Thanks for the Chapter! Love the work Author!

Matt

Great and benevolent! Love it.

Nice a weekend chapter. Thanks!

Zogarth

Fixed

Corwin Amber

'had build up' build -> built 'small intricacies details' intricacies -> intricate

Somerito

I wonder what Villy is watching that is ruining his mood.

Thomas Brusilovsky

Good to know it is a very special birds

BubblyGhost

Good job, Z!

Dont_like_to_Talk

Thanks for the chapter

Yashakami

I was hoping for a primordial view of sylphie! Thanks for the chapter!


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