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Chapter 159 - Under Pressure

🕑 Added 2021-03-02 14:00:46 +0000 UTC

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Chill59

'Caleb had now accepted that Legacy after Umbra directed him towards it when he got his profession upgrade' - should be class upgrade

Looking forward to D rank evolution!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Adevna

It was never directly covered, but Caleb was addressed in the intermissions.

Ben Allen

What chapter did Caleb meet Umbra?

Maniac000

Onward to D rank!

Steven Thompsen

really like the chapter cool that their brothers and everything I didn't realize that before if you made it obvious or not I don't know but yeah I do feel certain parts are slightly exaggerated but nothing bad thanks for the chapter he did a great job

Jonathan Timm

could we get a name when we change pov's cause i read like 100 different stories and i sometimes need a reminder. Only if its not a hassle

Thanks for the chapter!

Zogarth

Fixed.

Blaublue

Good chapter, and great pov from his brother. I like that Caleb got his strength somewhat from his own achievements - he grew up not succumbing to the pressure he could feel from his older brother. He didn't just get served a powerful inheritance on a platter (nor to control him due to being Jake's brother it seems), but was actually suited for it

Corwin Amber

'he sat was it did next' -> 'he saw what it did next' 'managed to a path' -> 'managed a path'

Zogarth

Fixed!

BubblyGhost

that occasional hit.-> occasionally when he sat was it did next.-> rewrite The Den Mother he -> With the a usually fast -> an unusually stopped, acting -> remove comma Ohhh man, what I would give to binge another 10 or so chapters. The world is definitely in motion,

Zarik0

Yeah his sense are euthanasied after bathing in this "pressure" on his survival instinct all his life and nothing happen to him, so now he pfff on all similar thing (he recognize them but they cant really make him move on instinct of inferior, his instinct is numb to it xD

Derze

looking forward to their eventual reunion.

Sial28

Thanks for the chapter. Nice background.

Jerome Atkinson

Even as a child he was an apex

Mislandor

Ohh - I like this one - a bit short - but nice to see Caleb and get some background on Jake.

Zogarth

Only two :p

Seijax

Beautiful chapter. Both things happening together resonated deeply! Watch out for Tenlucis name though, it's been spelled out in 3 different ways

James Squibb

That. Was. Good.

Zogarth

Fixed.

Frardowin

Tenlucis had been a good of darkness and lightning, ---> Tenlucis had been a god of darkness and lightning,

Zogarth

Fixed.

Thanks for the chapter~ It's nice to know more about what makes Jake, Jake.

Malthe Mørk Mejlby

... what he was too complicated ... ->... what he was were too complicated

CryoHydra357

Maybe he has some enhanced instinct or senses as well, just enough to register the danger Jake posed. Not enough to be considered a bloodline ability though.

Alex Hignett

Loved this chapter, thank you!

_mori

So Caleb himself is probably delusional. I’m guessing he’s just kinda desensitized to powerful beings in a way. He’s also talented. After all, he’s the only other person that noticed Jake’s abnormality, in a way.

Seb

Oh I really like that! I hope that Villy and Caleb meet sometime. That would be so entertaining!!

Connor Bruha

Thanks for the chapter! had been a good of darkness -> had been a god of darkness

Yashakami

Nice, the intensity at the end was cool. Really looking forward to more. Thanks for the chapter!

Professional_industrial_man

Thank

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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