Leaqio.com
Zogarth from patreon
Zogarth patreon

Side Story 12 - What Happens in Nevermore, Stays in Nevermore

🕑 Added 2021-03-07 14:43:11 +0000 UTC

Comments

Andyr98

The gods just returns last week

Valhazstromoz

Anybody else come back to read this after Leneas return?

Valhazstromoz

Wish granted XD

Phil Ritter

Considering he is stronger than the hegemon he should be at least at the first empyrean step maybe higher. He is strong but not at yips level so I’d say probably among the top 0.01% of gods but still quite far below the peak powerhouses. Probably because he is mainly a guard hydra not doing enough adventuring on his own

ABTelford

Probably not - it sounds like an indestructible marble to me.

The Uub

Also on your third reread?

Hotep Saxis

Very enjoyable chapter. I hope Zogarth decides to write more of these at some point.

angel

I come to you from even further from the future to say he conquered nevermore

Abdulaziz ALRumaih

Wait isn’t that the same thing that Jake made in nevermore

forgetfulposum

"compare them to Pylon’s of Civilizations" -> Pylons "with the two died being the only men" -> dead "were prepared to go to move on to" -> prepared to move on to

Mownmbasa

Man, i remember reading the Brimstone Hegemon demise in the main story and enjoying myself of how badass Villy is. Then i stumbled upon this gem and 3 rereads later i still get a wide grin on my face every time Lord Protector scoffs at the insignificant power of the paper gods. I wish i'd know a god ranking in detail and where Snappy ranks. I mean i had a feeling he is a monster pun intended but damn son! Manhandling those 6 gods like small puppies. and through all that to remember that monster balling his eye out like a puppy when Villy made his return and called him by his nickname! Literally in few chapters i saw more character development of a side character and i can empathyse with him more than most of other MC's in other stories! Damn Zogarth you do know how to create a character.

Bunny Waffles

I come to you from the future to tell you...he is on his way there now.

Pratish Sungum

I hope we see Linea in main story too

Lorraine V

Ty

Alex R

It had been many millennia since she [left] the Order before her journey into Nevermore. -> had left

BrokenMortal

This totally not a useless comment

Aelthai

It's a good thing I'm reading this at home. It would be embarrassing to be laughing this hysterically in public. Totally not useless orb indeed!

Michael

Insane that we already can see the godly ranks. Very excited for the MC to kill a god while still in S rank.

Michael

"It's been 10,000 years in real time since the City Owner left, and now he's the 13th primordial."

Shadeymankey

“What is this??!?!!? Infinite monsters I can kill that will always be stronger than me?!?” That was the last anyone of his generation saw of Jake. His city manage to survive due to the threat of him ever returning.

Zogarth

Fixed

Duder

It had been many millennia before she left the Order before her journey into Nevermore. (1st) before >> since The Wyrmgod of Nevermore created the dungeon during the 2nd era and quickly became the namesake of the Primordial. >> and it quickly became the

flssdd

Snappy is aptly named :)

Zogarth

Fixed

flssdd

Miranda -> Viridia "as the arm transformed extended and transformed" extended is also used in the previous sentence

Zogarth

Fixed.

Johnny Smithers

“I see…. what are your plains, Linea?” plains ->plans

Steven Thompsen

I know right that's one of the things I'm looking forward to most.

Patrick Ralston

I wonder when Jake will get introduced to Nevermore. I’m pretty sure he’d love it.

Zogarth

Fixed.

Amelgar

ah... so that's why he's called Snappy

тђє v๏เ๔

Yet she had chosen the Brimstone Conglomerate as the Hegemon had offered him things she simply couldn’t refuse. Him should be her?

тђє v๏เ๔

and in the floor they had just cleared a week outside was over a century. Reads a bit weird or missing a word "inside"

Zogarth

Fixed.

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter 'As a stable of the multiverse' stable -> staple 'floor was were' was -> and (or something similar)

Zogarth

Yep, fixed stuff.

Littleme02

few thousand was was normal were within Nevermore already when they heard - the word "already" feels weird here but that might just be me

Eofad

It seems like it pays to remember that freedom isn’t free and the price for freedom is nearly always paid in blood.


More Creators