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Chapter 164 - Rituals

🕑 Added 2021-03-09 12:48:35 +0000 UTC

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thanks for the chapter

Adevna

Yeah, but collecting people would go against Jake's whole "If you're not powerful enough to take the challenge on alone, then you weren't powerful enough, were you?" philosophy.

Gage Ostrander

Thanks for the chapter. I can't help but feel that Jake's faction is kinda sad compared to all the other factions we have seen so far. They all seem to have numbers, leadership, talent, and direction. While Jake's faction has well Jake, and maybe a couple Hawks? Lol can't wait to see how it all goes.

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Ray Burns

Hatchie!

Chris

What are the odds the little baby bird can also take a human form

TheCommensuratePup

Bets on the babies name? I am thinking Small Birdie or Hatchie personally.

Zogarth

Fixed!

Corwin Amber

'had first dips' dips -> dibs 'ignored her comments' her -> his 'intricate scrips' scrips -> scripts

HardcoreLace756

Thanks!

Zogarth

The mana with a green sheen is still pure mana. At least they can't identify it as anything else. I added in another small sentence.

Zogarth

Fixed.

Damian

LYet despite it all being pure mana... a small part of it had a distinct green sheen. It was incredibly faint, **but they all noticed it nevertheless**. The mana from that green energy just felt… ancient. After all, the lightning mana was eliminated, and only wind-affinity and pure mana should remain… a third element persisted. Tiny purple sparks that refused to be culled. **None of them noticed this, not even Jake with his immense perception or Mystie controlling the formation. They were like pure mana, but… somehow rawer**.” Conflicting sentences here. Great chapter though

kataklyst

Casper stood channeled -> Casper stood and channeled could use was a concept -> could use as it was a concept

Zogarth

Rewrote the sentence.

Gardor

While we're at it, who's teaching birds intricate magic rituals

Littleme02

a green sheen was also soon

Connor Bruha

Thanks for the chapter!

Zogarth

Fixed.

Zogarth

As mentioned earlier in the story, only gods are immortal. Everything else has a limited lifespan, though they do vary.

Jake

“Small bolts of thunder began jumping back and forth” Should be “Small bolts of lightning began jumping back and forth”, you use lightning in the next sentence - only that one was wrong. Like the chapter, can’t wait to see the new baby chick peck a dragon to death!

Patrick Schuldt

So are the undead immortal? Or can they die of old age?

Gardor

How and Why would newbs in the tutorial make tokens that sensed death aspected energy in Pylons for once they got out of the tutorial

Thanks for the chapter~ The recent chapters have been a bit of a grind, but the perspectives from other's on Earth makes everything far more interesting thankfully.

Tomer Yud

yesss a new chapter!

Professional_industrial_man

Thank

MahoganyWood

Thanks for the chapter!

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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