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Chapter 165 - Taking Charge

🕑 Added 2021-03-10 12:46:52 +0000 UTC

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Zogarth

Fixed

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Adevna

particularity of the area > peculiarity of the area

Zogarth

That just sounds way too polite. He isn't giving them an invitation, he is saying: "Come or not, I don't really care, but if you come it is on my terms."

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! Btw, 'I am fine with offering them to come' is awkward. Maybe 'I am fine with extending them an invitation' or similar. Really looking forward to tomorrow's chapter:-)

Thanks for the chapter!

Zogarth

The second one sounds way too polite for the situation. It is meant as Miranda about to something about what they may, do and Jake rebuts with: "What they can do is fuck off."

'“They can fuck off, can they.' -> '"Then they can fuck off, can't they?' I'm not sure about my suggestion but I just feel the original doesn't flow right.

Jorge

Another day of waiting here I come... thx for the chapter

John Smith

So when do we find out what sort of bird the hatchling will be? I was hoping to see it hatch soon.

Zogarth

I surprisingly fixed it.

Loipers

"he was surprised when the two hawks surprised him" Hmm yes the floor here is made of floor. I'd replace one of the repeats.

Zogarth

Already found and fixed :p

kataklyst

it wasn’t like they tried -> it wasn’t like they were tired (maybe?)

Gage Ostrander

Thanks for the chapter. And of course making me eat my words from my comment in the last chapter. Lol

Zogarth

Fixed.

Nikolai

Thanks for the chapter! «spent a few hours resting after the ritual to regenerate some resources before heading off, so it wasn’t like they tried.» Supposed to be tired?

Zogarth

Fixed.

Jason Bryant

“ Jake wondered how the small city had developed [when] he was gone.” (when -> while) Makes more sense in this context.

Connor Bruha

Thanks for the chapter!

Zogarth

Yep, fixed.

Derze

Nice.Already see what the plan is. Since trying to Identify him is impossible but trying to Identify Mystie is at least doable to confirm she is D-grade he will have enough “backup” to make everyone submit.

roflvaliant

"They clearly weren't attached to their next." Should that be "nest" instead?

Thanks for the chapter~ I can just imagine Jake as some crotchety old man yelling "get off my lawn ya damn kids" to the people from the fort if tehy demand to much :D

Bodoroo

I was thinking that either the birds would move their nest to his city and become some kind of guardians of it, or they give the hatchling to Jake and he makes some kind of companion pact with it. As far as I can see, things are moving towards the both positive outcomes at once. Also, Jake is like a boss that sends holiday postcards of him fishing and hunting when the deputy is crumbling under stress lol

Professional_industrial_man

Thank

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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