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Side Story 13 - Bird Business

🕑 Added 2021-03-14 12:54:57 +0000 UTC

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Phil Ritter

The thought they will one day randomly meet just seems too great a chance to miss

Corvid

Going back and rereading these side stories, I really want one about Sylphie's older sibling that survive

Phil Ritter

I’m pretty sure there is a quick bird pov before he comes back with the D-Grade Core he hunted on the clouds islands

Phil Ritter

Side story 1&3 are only accessible by buying the book either Kindle or on Audible. First one is about Viridia and the moment the order first meets Villy again when he comes out of seclusion. The third is about the life of Matteo one of the sneaky boys together with Caleb. His life before the integration + tutorial life and meeting Caleb for the first time. Both are really good and I have no clue why they aren’t on Patreon but maybe that’s because all other side stories weren’t published at least not in the audiobooks

Phil Ritter

Let’s hope there are more to come. Maybe they will come in bursts with a few side stories and then long breaks in between. At least I hope that’s the plan

Khumo Mononyane

I feell you bro be wondering the same thing for a while now

Jesse

Are there more side stories coming or just the 13?

forgetfulposum

"as they become closer than ever." -> became closer than ever "Her feathers turned blueish" -> bluish "its means were stuck down" -> struck down

jsw

+1 from me as well.

Andrew Finlay

Nor me

ABTelford

I can’t find side stories 1 and 3…help?

Raven

Great story! An idea that came to mind which might make it even greater and include additional humor would be to add in the finale of the story arc from the birds perspective. Since we only got the broad strokes of what said human thought the birds were saying when Hawkie finally decided to let him in on the project, could be fun to see the other side as the final part to the story right up to the point of the hatching.

Grant

Great

Lorraine V

Ty

Alex R

The hawk flapped its wings as [It] elegantly -> it

Linbi

"The poor thing" xD

BrokenMortal

Zogarth you're side stories are incredible and bring additional depth to your story. But only make them if you want to. I love your story and wish I donate more. Thx

Zogarth

Fixed

Duder

Love the side stories!!

Duder

The male hawk had to interfere and took the egg in its break as it came in and break >> beak

roxurio10003

I love side stories 😍

Zogarth

Fixed

Johnny Smithers

"Far from as much as a human would have, but levels above what a hawk could possibly have." Wording here is a bit awkward, this might flow better, "Far from what a human would have, but levels above what a hawk possibly could." ", with everything from birds even smaller than the two hawks to large behemoths of bears and bovines fought to claim the item that had appeared." fought-->fighting.

Michael Click

Beautiful chapter, thank you!

Zogarth

Fixed. You get this one!

Corwin Amber

'act the resulted' the -> that

RottenTangerine

Great chapter, thanks for posting!! This one was fun to read (as are most other side stories).

Zogarth

Fixed.

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