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Chapter 168 - Phillip

🕑 Added 2021-03-15 13:02:06 +0000 UTC

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Zogarth

Fixed

Oz

“Miranda threw a questioning Gaze...” prob should be non-capitalized gaze

Zogarth

Fixed

Duder

I found that doubtful… considered a beast powerful enough [found >> find] [considered >> considering]

TheCommensuratePup

Would love to see Jake show off more, it's fun when he startles or scares everyone around him.

Veritas Dolor

provoke a shoot, blame the victim, use the guilt to establish domination, Miranda sure is merciless, but i love it

Balsamic ThunderThighs

"Jake saw a small smile creep onto Miranda’s lips " I read this as. Jake saw a small creepy smile on Miranda's lips. xD

CyclopsSlayer

Thanks for the chapter! I do have to wonder what the casualty rate is amongst the children, likely too high, way too high...

Zogarth

Fixed

Corwin Amber

'we build the safe' build -> built OR build -> are building

Zogarth

Rewrote it a bit

Littleme02

Jake was the only person he knew where it was

Thanks for the chapter!

Derze

solid chapter.

HardcoreLace756

Thanks for the Chapter

Connor Bruha

Thanks for the chapter!

Professional_industrial_man

Thank

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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