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Chapter 169 - The Fort

🕑 Added 2021-03-16 12:25:14 +0000 UTC

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Duder

He took the time to try and estimate how people lived there [how >> how many]

"Because it was the territory of the Primal Hunter." I could literally hear the mic drop right there. It'd would've been a fantastic, albeit damn short, point to stop at xD Thanks for the chapter~

Balsamic ThunderThighs

It'd be kinda funny if the person who shot Jake was the craftsmen. Then after realizing he could advance further creates a bow for Jake. But nah that's too simple right?

M van Dongen

Time for a Buffalo hunt.

Zogarth

Fixed.

Zoltan Miskolci

"The owner had truly gone and above and beyond!" => "The owner had truly gone above and beyond!" The first "and" is not needed, it makes the sentence simply wrong.

James Squibb

One Infused Powershot, coming right up! OR time to release the poison wings!

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Zarik0

Typical Rescue incoming or whatever shit "see im Power" with helpful ennemie appearing But i like it ;)

Grammarmelade

estimate how [many] people lived there

Maniac000

Oh nice. Hope there’s some D ranks in there for Jake to push him up to lvl 99

Zogarth

Rewrote things a bit.

Corwin Amber

'and at that point, just' and -> but 'belong. it’s instinct' it's -> It's

Yashakami

Finally found a good place to include his childhood. Nice! Thanks for the chapter

Professional_industrial_man

Thank

Lockwood

Holy shit. That would be amazing!

Zogarth

Fixed.

kataklyst

anyone but the Miranda -> anyone but Miranda

vaizard27

Please tell me tomorrows chapter will just be named "Split Arrow"

TheCommensuratePup

I personally love the confusion between Jake and Miranda. With Jake as much of an oddity as he is it makes sense for folk not to understand him well. Fantastic chapter, one of the best in a while.

SlaveToMyWhims

Wow, my man. Now that's a leap. Words sound similar, so this is how this undefined and undescribed process that might exist works.

SlaveToMyWhims

either way, i agree. Clumsy toddler with a bazooka trope does not fit Jake. Or his stats. That's why i'm not a fan of a gaming system aspect. They are constraining AF. You can't write a 1000 INT points character the same as if they had 100 INT. Otherwise you are just writing pointless spreadsheets and tables and selling number increases as character growth.

Gardor

I think you should chill on the misunderstandings between Miranda and Jake; Jake's main stat is perception and Miranda's class is "super personal assistant". Beyond that, it's just never really worth it, it's not funny or interesting, and it's been done 1000 times. Wow this came out way meaner than I meant to.

Xhaare

It only took me this long to make the connection. ‘Primal Hunter’ always sounded a bit lack luster for it’s so called ancientness to make even the Primordial Viper scared. However, now I realize that Primordial and Primal are quite similar... doesn’t that basically mean he’s literally the predator of Primordials? His Ascension to godhood requires a slaying of a Primordial or something? O.O

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter

Gabriel

Thank you!

Connor Bruha

Thanks for the chapter!


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