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Chapter 208 - Dervish

🕑 Added 2021-04-28 10:24:14 +0000 UTC

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Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Osiris

Jake is becoming quite dependent on his soul attack against agility focused opponents. Maybe it is intentional but this is an opportunity for an "oh fuck" moment.

Zogarth

Fixed

Chris

we have seen that jake is not the brightest.

None of them posed any thread besides the Dervish. Thread -> threat

PatronTurtle

Where's the fun in that. There'll be chappies of getting there and chatting, threats, and politics. Suddenly a body is found and it looks like Jake did it (oh no!). Now it's time for break

Zogarth

Fixed.

Somerito

Shouldn't jake be trying to upgrade descending dark fang to something that uses his arcane affinity.

Somerito

He moved in between two spinning tails, the monkey unable to move them as it stood frozen for a moment longer. With both hands on his blade, he raised it high as he stabbed down towards the skull of the money, swirling dark mana around the edge. money ->monkey

Zogarth

Fixed

Zogarth

Fixed

Chris

Dervishes neck > dervish's

Chris

Maybe also break that into two sentences?

Chris

As the once more used > as he once more used

Littleme02

learned a little was it was already

Zogarth

Fixed

Zogarth

Fixed.

Chris

Larget, > larger

Jonathan

Nogging -> noggin

Leonard Klein

As far as i remember that super arrow took some time to fully materialize wich makes it less useful in a fight besides being a first strike weapon. The regular arrows seem to be doing fine anyway.

Xhaare

Is he having so much fun he doesn’t wanna use the super arrow thingy? I guess his arcane mana doesn’t really affect that arrow anymore though,

Zogarth

Fixed some stuff.

BubblyGhost

descend - descent descended - ascended

Shade

I have to say the Dervish with bladed tails sounds cool, until you try to picture him trying to strike Jake, butt first. Then it’s a lot more comical, even more when it’s special move is beyblade by rotating itself with the tails extended. Jake is merciful cause the Dervish wouldn’t have wistood the shame of full sentience.

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter:-)

Arrogant Savant

I hope the conference arc is done before you go on break :(

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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