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Chapter 252 - Something Long Overdue

🕑 Added 2021-07-05 10:56:11 +0000 UTC

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He had replaced everything from the first dungeon with the Badger Pants 'gone', but he had more subpar equipment to get rid of. think you can just get rid of the word 'gone'.

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Zogarth

Fixed

Nicholas Paterson

Some quick edits: Not, not in any philosophical way, -> No, not(?)

BrokenMortal

Oh my god did I feel that "You too". My social anxiety triggered just reading it. Thx for the chapter.

RedFaux

He's never gonna find it

Zogarth

I changed it to "This" It would just sounds so wrong and bad imo in this context.

Jonathan

No 'which'. Just It would. Starting it with which makes it not only a sentence fragment, but one which should be connected to the end sentence in the previous paragraph.

Zogarth

Fixed... except the last one "Which it would 100% have happened" That sentence does not sound right at all in my head.

Jonathan

legendary-rarity and indestructible built, build Improving his smell would be nice, his sense of smell. Improving his smell would require Old Spice or something :P Expert Stealth on full display, and his new cloak making him appear almost invisible. no comma it really wasn’t a surprise he missed the powerful D-grade pass by. passing by Curious, Jake made his way to when the true city began. where and he even saw hanging bridges connect many wooden platforms above. connecting There was a single large man inside, working it. no comma ... unless the man was a really sexy dancer or well-dressed or something like that Which would 100% have happened It would

Landsraad

I wish we just kept upgrading his Tutorial cloak. Imagine becoming a God and still wearing your Tutorial cloak! Would be epic

Vega

Other stories, MC founds a city, meticulously and miraculously knows everything about city building, takes pride in it. Jake, “oh shit I have a city maybe I should visit”

How close is Jake to being able to churn out some good elixirs? He is far below his consumption cap, so he could really use some attribute point boosting elixirs, and he also needs to level up his profession. Win win.

Zogarth

Removed walked. Just an old relic of a former edit :p

Zogarth

Fixed :)

"Jake couldn’t just wear four chestplates or two boots. " I guess you meant to write "two pairs of boots", unless Jake has been walking around all this time with one foot being barefoot.

Vaccus

A minute later, Jake walked saw the first treehouse. Little awkward sentence! Good chapter he's finally seeing his city after months

Seiryus

This was a great and most welcome chapter after all that action overload.

Syntrx

TFTC

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! :-)

Dont_like_to_Talk

Thanks for the chapter

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter

Yashakami

This is the story I've been wanting to read. The adventures of a chef in a system apocalypse.


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