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Chapter 228 - A Question of Morality

🕑 Added 2021-06-04 10:38:53 +0000 UTC

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Nah, that's between him and the dude. No need to ask his friend anything

Zoe

I like that William’s got some ptsd from brutally dying along with his new found empathy, I think it can make for some fun character “development” maybe he won’t even be recognizable?

Emby

Weird he didn't ask Villy about the weird dude he met

Zogarth

Fixed

Nicholas Paterson

Some quick edits: related to when you talked out bloodlines operating outside the system -> talked about(?) (Personally, I like William. Both in the narrative sense and as a character. It was fun watching some weirdo get introduced and me not caring, to having him be one of my favorite characters.)

Loyal Patreon follower

Would be cool if he can take the birds to the treasure hunt. After all they are D-Rank.

Sterban Friz

I like William, it's kinda like adding raditz back into dbz, bringing the old bad guys back, it has a certain... Feel to it that I like

James Faulkner

TFTC!

Shadeymankey

Lol well I gueeessss we can hold the pitchforks a little lower. Maybe. Ain’t no promises we will put out the torches though haha

Zarik0

And Villy is zzz here, ok for the its not a question of moral and evil or not, but why he didnt say to Jake "stop thinking about this, its have no right or wrong here, just the side you on, so do what you want but hey buddy dont forget he already tryed to kill you personnaly 2-3 time and he have schemed against you and you nearly died because of it in the tutorial and he killed your friend and people you know and he is a psycho and Everlasting behing him is a total psycho scheming too, the psy who come to you and bulshit you for poor willy pity him stink big the beginning of scheme or shit so dont get grabed in, so my advice is ignore him like you do, its not worth it thinking and doing thing about it but if you meet by luck, better to finish him off for close this potential problem later, he is one of your ennemie who have caused you wrong, no need to pity him or taking time to think about it and be woo by one of the move on his side

IJustWannaRead

A plan I hate is never a good plan IMO. Honestly the main reason I want him to die is I think the character is bad and should be gone to better the story. However, you are the author and you really haven’t disappointed so far, so I’ll trust you got something good, maybe something with Casper.

Zarik0

Mmm i dont care if William come again in the story, its author plan Just this part here when Jake thinking about all this bulshit is totally unecessary, they are no evil/good if you take it globally, everything depend on who point of view it is, so Jake getting in this shit globaly is so meee, the question doesnt exist and is obvious for him Because little bitch psychoanalyze come and beg him is so zzzz, why he listen to her in the first place? he doesnt care, why he just dont say to her when she talk about poor psycho william and he traumatized and etc he just say "i dont care, why did you talk to me? go talk to the other people when he killed their friend and killed them too, he killed friend and people i know and tryed to kill me, he is a psycho who caused trouble, end of story i dont care about him but if he appear im gonna kill him, he is a ennemy and have caused wrong to me, that it, so he better dont met me again, you and him are irrelevant to me but i dont mind finish him off if we meet, moral and your bulshit you try are irrelevant, he caused wrong to me, i dont have to pity him or understand him, end of story, now fuck off with your shit, go beg the people he have caused more wrong, im not interested" "A part of him did, just to “finish the job,” and another part of him thought: “is he even worth thinking about?”" That it, he is irrelevant to him, why talk about moral and shit, why think about him and listen to little bitch who beg for him, he caused wrong to him and his friend, so ignore him now because not worh it and if he meet him at some point by chance just finish him off because he is a ennemie, no need to pity/understand him or other bulshit moral and thinking and get wooo by bulshit talk of the other side (poor willi he is traumatized and etc, pity him plz), he caused wrong to him and his friend so he is a ennemie, he is not worth it thinking and going hunting him but if he meet by chance, finish him off for good is not bad, end of it He have no reason to let him live if he meet him (he tryed to kill him and killed friend and people he know and caused wrong to his side)

Zogarth

Fixed

Corwin Amber

'sat the steps' -> 'sat on the steps' 'also has something' has -> have

Sammot

Well even though I hate William and rather have him just simply die. I'll trust Zogarth on this one since until now the story has been superb.

Amit

I am glad that Jake finallly rubbed the bird. Now he is human.

SunderGoldmane

I actually love William as both characters embody the title of your story.

Zogarth

It is after returning to Earth. May rewrite it a bit

Mattias Åkesson

Correction, I know you're party playing - partly playing Villy also mentioned that William hadn't killed people in the double digits. Last slaughter was around 40 if I remember correctly.

Slycerr

Nice chapter, but I hate you for the rhyme in the AN...

Syntrx

The guy with the daughter, who tried to kill the space mage for a treasure.

Ian Gaston

90% of the time the author is write about their own story. Keep doing what you think is best. I mean that is what brought us all here after all

Jonathan

I forgot who Donald was.

Jonathan

On the other hand, there's still a part of me that wants to see the version of Star Wars where DV was not Luke's father and Luke got to kill him, and the emperor, himself.

I don't really mind William. I wouldn't say that he is well written, but far from terrible. People hate him bc he is widely misunderstood. Anyway, thank for the chapter

The Tallest Tree

Eh. Jake killed him the first time because he was scum who hurt the weak for pleasure (the antithesis of Jake). Don't get the hangup with all this. If he wants to kill him again he should, if he doesn't feel the need then that is that. Pretty standard for Jake, no?

Amelgar

yeah, was kinda wondering what happened to the guy

Oliver Wolfe

Thanks!. Note: peeping tom, not peeking tom.

Gabriel

I generally do like when an enemy changes, becomes a better person and someone who wont stab the main cast in the back; when it's done well.

Arrogant Savant

Thank you for chapter and I like William so I don't mind

Zogarth

Was meant to be say, fixed it.

Ikawaii

hard to way -> hard to weigh?


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