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Intermission 6 - William (1/3)

🕑 Added 2021-06-06 09:56:52 +0000 UTC

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BrokenMortal

I think Eversmile want to see how karma in a psychopath changes. Regardless if he goes full evil or good.

Zogarth

Fixed it a bit.

Vaccus

William didn’t even need to get closer, as he easily felt like. This sentence just kind of ends?

Sean Wilner

I'm concerned he'll be unable to keep the daughter safe because he can't kill in front of her 🤔

Bat

I am actually looking forward to reading about what William has been up to. He is an interesting character.

Mislandor

Ok - this is much better than I expected. Off to a very good start Zogarth.

Zogarth

Fixed

Triumphator

because the fucker bad bent time or some shit.

Zogarth

Fixed.

Michael

"and driveways that once without a doubt had big cars in them." -> "and driveways that once , without a doubt, had big cars in them."

Zogarth

Fixed.

Monus

Thanks for the chapters. "Why had his mater made " is it supposed to be "master" or is my english lacking?

Zogarth

Edited.

Zogarth

Edited some stuff.

Michael

taken to the tutorial from - in the entrance-area, surrounded by other patients and personal. *personnel

Michael

His new ‘master’ send: Sent*

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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