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Intermission 6 - William (3/3)

🕑 Added 2021-06-06 09:57:19 +0000 UTC

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Justin

Thanks for the chapters! Was good to see a change in William!

WhiteRabbit

Bloodlines are inherited, can only be "activated" externally

BrokenMortal

Completely struck out on the giving bloodline theory. Once I catch up I'll start over from the beginning to see what else I missed. Thx Zogarth, you're the best! 👍

Zogarth

Can't give a bloodline. Also, read the description of the "bloodline" again and compare it to Jake's :)

BrokenMortal

I suspect that Eversmile gave William the bloodline. I think Jake would've sensed it, even if it was dormant.

Balsamic ThunderThighs

Honestly excited to see where you take William as a character Zogarth. Can't tell if you want him a future ally, enemy or temporary partnership in the future.

Zogarth

Fixed

Nicholas Paterson

Some quick edits: could only end in bloodshed. And not Williams blood. -> William's blood.

Vaccus

In the end, he only killed it after he was forced to do so after It said ten were already claimed, and even then, it was a good while later. Kind of awkward sentence? Like two got mashed together

Sammot

I'm pretty sure he is the God of karma

Syntrx

Well, looks like you discovered a plot hole, congrats! I hope I get to discover a plot hole myself, though I doubt it.

Syntrx

I doubt William could win against SS, considering the author is hinting at Jake and SS being comparable.

WolfWithAGun

you know, to me the best part of how afraid william is of Jake is the fact.... William wasnt even killed by archery. William KNOWS jake is an archer, and should be Dex based, with some Str. what did jake kill him with? brute force. Not his archery. not stealth. not magic. He smashed him into the ground and beat him to death. And william knows that isnt what he's good at. Makes me kind of curious how William stacks up against the other big 3 of the Valhal lady, Sword Saint, and Jake's brother. obviously, he doesnt stack up to jake.

Zarik0

Great chapter, i see author have a plan I just want to have the Pov of her meeting with Jake or atleast some of it, because it was so strange Jake get shaken after she come begged him, a little bulshit (except for some little interest he dont give a fuck and its a no brain to think at what to do after what william do to him (tryed 2-3 time personnaly to kill him, scheme when he barely survived because of him, killed friend and people he know) so him getting in the web when she talk to him was strange and she doesnt get some rebuck, "go talk to people he have killed and their lovers instead of me mmm? i dont give a fuck about your demand, i dont care about him but if he appear i dont mind finish him off so future problem and retribution is over, and dont say i need to pity and he doesnt deserve it or other bulshit" I wonder what the 1 hour talk was, wonder if Jake say at some point, "oh so you with him? let me guess he "saved you" and you dont have real choice, did you know he is a "master" of scheme and manipulation? and his master Eversmile is a total psycho god, guess it was not a coincidence "you get saved", he play with Karma and scheme for what i know, he like it a lot, did you say you have a karmic contract? i think your the only bind by it and manipulated (I dont remember but did Eversmile is the God of Karma?)

The 49th Khan

Wait, did Jake have his yellow eyes when he killed William? I thought that it was Apex Hunter skill he bought after the tutorial that changed them. How would he know?

Jordan

OK William is much more tolerable now. These last few chapters have made a nice intermission.

Zogarth

Kept vague on purpose for people to figure out themselves. Lots of weird stuff in these chapters on purpose.

Chioke Nelson

Did we establish what his weapon is or was that glossed over?

Zogarth

Fixed.

Ben Waschuk

I secound this. Espicially her pov at congress.

Jonathan

Mary, still a bit uneasy on her feet, unsteady nothing was ever really ‘wrong with me per se 'wrong'

silder

I normally hate interludes, but these three were fantastic! Great job!

Bat

Great chapters! Interesting to see a psychopath have emotions for the first time.

IJustWannaRead

This was actually very interesting. As others have mentioned, it’s too bad we don’t get to see her reaction to jake. If she thinks William is powerful, I can’t imagine what she’s think of jake or the old sword guy. Now, I dislike William as a character, have from the start, but these chapters were some of the most interesting this story has had in quite a while, outside of the Congress. The fighting is great and I love to read about progress, but breaks like this really hammer in why I actually pay to support/get advanced chapters for this book.

Jacob

Dang was hoping we'd get to see Kim's side of the conversation

alexbk

thanks. are we going tobget something of Ms. Kims POV of the Conference?

Tomer Yud

thanks for posting all 3 chapters!

Tomer Yud

yea William is so much weaker right now than Jake

AnonyGuy

The dude died not knowing how. 1 minute he's bragging then nothing.

s476

Thanks for the chapters

s476

A tip for corrections: make a comment on which people comment with corrections. That way they are easier to find and arent all over the other comments.

Wolven

'William killed them all, except for the D-grade. He actually felt a bit nervous facing it, as it was far stronger than anything ever before.' The biggest difference between Jake and William in one sentence

Amelgar

huh... looks like William hasn't changed all that much in terms of intelligence. also looks like he's sorta got a similar situation as Jake going on

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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