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Chapter 231 - Man Cave(s)

🕑 Added 2021-06-09 10:50:50 +0000 UTC

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Danielle Warvel

Lol, watch list. I like what you did there 👌👍 love the word play in this chapter.

Zogarth

Fixed

check out of they had something decent -> check out if they had something decent

As fast as he can step right? I think there was an increasing mana cost per step (could be wrong about that). But with his high Agi he can move pretty damn fast.

Zogarth

We know he is fast AF and getting faster at traveling, and that's what's most important. Especially that his range with One Step Mile is increasing.

Adam

I think it’s fine not that long would infer an hour tops basically the farthest most people might commute to work and given you can infer it’s much further than 100 kilometers away given its well outside of the pylons influence you can infer he can comfortably maintain at or near sub Mach speeds for travel at least.

Vaccus

teleportation circle being build--> teleportation circle being built. Great chapter!

Zogarth

Fixed some things.

"He made it to the Fort in not that long..." Would be better to just give a time. "He made it to the Fort in less than 30 minutes..."

What is the actual distance in kilometers between Jake's home and the Fort? Now that we know Jake can move just over 100-meters with a step of One Step Mile, the obvious question is how rapidly he can step with the skill. Once per second? Ten times per second? What is his maximum velocity using the skill?

Corwin Amber

'now no longer recall' <- re-phrasing needed 'Arnold didn’t even notice Jake when he entered but was too busy working' <- awkward phrasing

Zogarth

Fixed all the things, even caught a few more small ones while going through stuff.

Jonathan

It is more if you think you can do it, and of course, has the time to. have There already lives more people there than in the entirety of Haven. More people already live there than... especially when you could travel hundreds of kilometers in less than his commute to work was before the system. less time It removed wind resistance and even made the normal arrows fired a bit faster. fire The string is made of the sinew of beast the spirits now no longer recall. a beast but the first thing he did was to straight ahead go straight Also you have him walk straight ahead in the next sentence, seems redundant. It had actually been active for a time and had a corresponding back in Haven they used to transport goods, but Neil had moved that outside and began remodeling the one in here. corresponding spot or circle, also begun

Zogarth

Pylon influence.

sqeesqad

Is it the pylon's influence or the actual city that has grown to 100km?

Jeff Gaebler

the teleportation circle being build. Build should be built right?m

Michael

I think these chaps are quite raw. If you wait a few hours until he edits them fully, it might solve your problem?

Syntrx

TFTC!

Deltoren

chapters recently have become a little simplified. as in this thing happened then this person spoke to this person. if it was a little morte complicated it would be fine but the words in the chapter say exactly that

James Faulkner

TFTC!

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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