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Chapter 233 - Evil Incarnate

🕑 Added 2021-06-11 10:36:40 +0000 UTC

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Balsamic ThunderThighs

This chapter was ridiculous in the best way possible and I hope all those mushrooms are purged indeed.

Zogarth

Rewrote it a bit

Corwin Amber

'powerful being' being -> beings (or just re-phrasing needed)

Zogarth

Fixed

Nicholas Paterson

Some quick edits: Jake heard an almost inaudibly sound that seemed -> inaudible

Osiris

I haven't encountered this kind of power yet. Interesting

TheShadowMuffin

So this might just be me, but I feel one of the first paragraphs talking about affinities of the cavern is a bit weird. I really feel it should mention that it's the affinities of the ambient mana instead of just affinities. Something like; "...helped him feel the many different affinities," -> "...helped him feel the many different affinities of the ambient mana,". Next paragraph also talks about how the dark-affinity limits vision, but from my understanding it is actually the dark-affinity mana that limits vision. Affinities should just be something describing characteristics, where the mana is the thing actually being the cause of effects and manifestations. I might just be nitpicking though, or have misunderstood how the magical system and world works.

Zogarth

I have never posted anything in Saturday, and I post new chaps randomly between 12 CEST and 17 CEST for Patreon (aka always before RR gets any posts).

Edward

Why are we not getting new chapters??

Luke Scheffe

I’m guessing the D Grade Dungeoneer title will give +3 to all stats, while dungeon Pioneer will give +9 per dungeon.

Zogarth

Thanks, man, I hope you continue to enjoy the story!

Zogarth

No, I actually wrote all that stuff before The Snake Report was ever published. I just think eating stuff to get stronger is usual, especially poison, and mushrooms are known for being poisonous. Also, snakes rock.

s476

oh random thought: is villy eating mushrooms a reference to: snake report?

Legacy

Thanks for the chapter! I become a patron yesterday and just binged my way up to here. This story is fantastic, and shaping up to be my favorite on RR (hard to say as it's not completed, but so far I love it). I love the world that you've created - often I find I don't love side chapters with POVs of other characters, but you do it perfectly and it adds another great layer to the world. Given the speed that you write, it's shocking and impressive that the story is as concise and put together as it is and I'm not sure you get enough credit for it. You've released upwards of 2500 pages since your first post 8 months ago, which is freakishly fast even when compared to authors known for their publishing speed. Cheers to this wonderous world you're creating and the effort you've put in so far to create it, and thanks for sharing all of this content for free (patreon not included).

Rui Lourenço

What novel have you been reading to this point if you don't know Jake's complicated relationship with Mushrooms? That's jake. Likes a challenge. Socially Anxious. Hates Mushrooms (but kinda likes to snack on them... it's a guilty pleasure). He's not a very complicated person.

Bat

@Damian that also puzzles me. I guess he doesn’t like mushrooms?

HereComesTheBoom

Jake hates mushrooms and the 4 big monsters are all essentially Mushroom Mages.

Damian

Still have no idea why they are called evil so much?

Bailey Lowe

I am so excited for Jake show these true heretics the correct path

Zogarth

Jake wasn't ignorant of any events in the fight? It never said he wasn't aware of it hulking out, but it just still moved to block. If he got hit by it, I could see the issue, but all it did was him cutting into a hand. Also, he can't see infinitely long ahead. We already knew he could see at least to both sides (around 10 kilometers total) but not all the way to the end... this isn't to say Jake had bad perception but that the cavern is just damn big.

Zogarth

Fixed

Vaccus

A malefic crusade hm? Interesting choice of words jake.

Gardor

I think you rely on Jake being ignorant of events (like him not noticing the fungalmancer hulking out before he got in the way) too often for a perception based character. I don't know how, but you should really figure out a different way to build tension in fight scenes. And stuff like "even my insane perception couldn't see through all the mist", well then what's the point of it Jakey?

Patrick Schuldt

Deeepdwellers-> Deepdwellers

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter

Arrogant Savant

Thanks for the chapter!

Monus

Thanks for the chapter!


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